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No Point
I just realized
No point sulking
about life
Why was I surprised
Nothing changes
Except the knife
That is disguised
To kill silently
In a hopeless strife
Anything I do
is going to hurt
Those I care about
I Just have to make do
With this life
Until my lights are out
This is true
A few more days and I
would not even have to shout
You can also check out this song based on my poem on Suno:
https://suno.com/song/5558bfa0-e815-41ef-8bd5-148990484b29
Written by
Samnash
(Sam Nash)
Published 25th Aug 2024
| Edited 30th Sep 2024
Author's Note
words I said this morning to a friend ... she is probably going to kick my ass
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Re. No Point
25th Aug 2024 7:26pm
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25th Aug 2024 7:52pm
Re. No Point
25th Aug 2024 7:29pm
Re. No Point
25th Aug 2024 7:30pm
Dear S,
A poem for the everyday. I manage to say something akin to this daily. This piece is deeply felt as days can be challenging until we have no more of them. This is wonderful writing on a subject close to me. H🌷
A poem for the everyday. I manage to say something akin to this daily. This piece is deeply felt as days can be challenging until we have no more of them. This is wonderful writing on a subject close to me. H🌷
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25th Aug 2024 7:52pm
Re. No Point
25th Aug 2024 7:50pm
Re. No Point
25th Aug 2024 9:04pm
Re. No Point
25th Aug 2024 9:53pm
title says it all!
The rest did not disappoint.
You expressed it perfectly.
The rest did not disappoint.
You expressed it perfectly.
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26th Aug 2024 3:49am
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27th Aug 2024 7:24pm
Re. No Point
27th Aug 2024 2:43am
Great write. Really different rhyming scheme, I dig it. Appreciate you.
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