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Trust Me
Do as I say.
Not as I do.
Give me a love,
Only I can view.
Give me your thoughts.
Let me be your mind.
I'll create history.
The beginning of time.
I'll make you glorious.
While both hand in hand.
Do as I say.
Do as I command.
Give me your empathy.
Let me feel you burst.
I'll take your sanity.
Destroy all that hurts.
High as the tides.
Where paddles don't work.
Give me your trust.
I'll give you the earth.
Just do what I want.
And everything I say.
And all of your sorrows,
I'll whisk them away.
Give me your memories.
Give me your mind.
No greater power,
Than calling you,
Mine.
Not as I do.
Give me a love,
Only I can view.
Give me your thoughts.
Let me be your mind.
I'll create history.
The beginning of time.
I'll make you glorious.
While both hand in hand.
Do as I say.
Do as I command.
Give me your empathy.
Let me feel you burst.
I'll take your sanity.
Destroy all that hurts.
High as the tides.
Where paddles don't work.
Give me your trust.
I'll give you the earth.
Just do what I want.
And everything I say.
And all of your sorrows,
I'll whisk them away.
Give me your memories.
Give me your mind.
No greater power,
Than calling you,
Mine.
Written by
AfterSexDilemma
Published 21st Aug 2024
| Edited 23rd Aug 2024
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Re. Trust Me
21st Aug 2024 3:12pm
What a poem! The wording, the message and the flow are perfect. A real stellar piece of writing my friend.
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21st Aug 2024 3:15pm
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21st Aug 2024 3:15pm
Re: Re. Trust Me
21st Aug 2024 4:00pm
Thank you for the feedback!! Very kind of you to stop by. Thank you for the RLE.
Re. Trust Me
22nd Aug 2024 1:20am
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22nd Aug 2024 1:50am
Re. Trust Me
22nd Aug 2024 2:37am
Wonderful write. Has kinda of a lyrical flavor to it. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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22nd Aug 2024 3:09am
Re. Trust Me
22nd Aug 2024 2:06pm
Love the flow to the piece and the piece in itself is super tight, really great piece here Lady
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Re. Trust Me
23rd Aug 2024 8:42am
As I was just read "Hellacious"...
I looked at this through a "religious" perspective...
What I like so much about this piece
is that: It could be seen on levels, from the micro to the macro.
But then...
Some say man created God in a human image...
Such things...
Such things which present themselves...
I looked at this through a "religious" perspective...
What I like so much about this piece
is that: It could be seen on levels, from the micro to the macro.
But then...
Some say man created God in a human image...
Such things...
Such things which present themselves...
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Re: Re. Trust Me
23rd Aug 2024 8:50am
I'm glad you understand that. That is how I try to write most of my poetry. To be seen on many levels. Thank you for your thoughts