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Necro Phyllis
I could brush your lips
With a broom
As i enter your mouth
Like a cattacomb
Your staring eyes
So mesmerise
And your body
Is like a tomb
by Jemia
With a broom
As i enter your mouth
Like a cattacomb
Your staring eyes
So mesmerise
And your body
Is like a tomb
by Jemia
Published 20th Aug 2024
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21st Aug 2024 11:18am
Nice use of brevity here, stopping before the idea is lost. Very skilled, and it came together nicely. Excellent poetry here.
21st Aug 2024 9:09pm
