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Eternal
Nuclear explosion electric sky
War machine is crushing skulls
Infection clouds the busted eye
Eternal the pain that never dulls
War machine is crushing skulls
Infection clouds the busted eye
Eternal the pain that never dulls
Author's Note
Random Musing. I'm not sure I know what I mean here.
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- Edited 6th Nov 2024 8:45pm
17th Aug 2024 2:23pm
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Re: Re. Eternal
18th Aug 2024 2:09am
Thanks so much for your commentary and kind words. Good point. I like that that as a meaning. Appreciate you.
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Re. Eternal
17th Aug 2024 4:42pm
There's a lot of heavy energy about, especially on the eve of an intense, rare, super blue moon in a futuristic sign. I sense you're picking up on it through this apocalyptic poem.
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Re: Re. Eternal
18th Aug 2024 2:11am
Thanks so much for your commentary and kind words. That works for me, it explains why I felt I had to write it. Appreciate you.
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Re. Eternal
18th Aug 2024 2:13am
Re: Re. Eternal
18th Aug 2024 2:18am
Thanks so much for your commentary and continued support, Fia. Means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
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Re. Eternal
18th Aug 2024 4:30am
You came up with that not knowing what you mean… just imagine what you can come up with if you do….
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Re: Re. Eternal
18th Aug 2024 4:35am
Well unsure of the meaning. I knew it was cryptic and apocalyptic and sounded cool. Just didn't know if four lines would nail the point home. I guess I doubted if it was cohesive enough. Thanks for your commentary and the read. Appreciate you.
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Re. Eternal
18th Aug 2024 3:37pm
Re: Re. Eternal
19th Aug 2024 2:19am
Thanks so much for your commentary and kind words. Glad you liked it. Appreciate you.
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