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A poem for Nate
Have I got your attention ?
Rather is that something I deserve ?
I spent my whole life ignorant
Recognition is something that is earnd
See life is so complicated
We are all individuals
I wish I could take away your hatred
Your past and the unthinkable
I could take away your pain
Your sorrow and mistakes
I'd take away your trust issues
Paranoia and clean the slate
I don't believe I'm better than you
As i would struggle but I'd cope
But if it ment your whole again
I could hold on to that hope
You could have a clearer outlook
Not over think shit and see the truth
First you need to forgive yourself
This woman can be the proof .
- Grifta
Rather is that something I deserve ?
I spent my whole life ignorant
Recognition is something that is earnd
See life is so complicated
We are all individuals
I wish I could take away your hatred
Your past and the unthinkable
I could take away your pain
Your sorrow and mistakes
I'd take away your trust issues
Paranoia and clean the slate
I don't believe I'm better than you
As i would struggle but I'd cope
But if it ment your whole again
I could hold on to that hope
You could have a clearer outlook
Not over think shit and see the truth
First you need to forgive yourself
This woman can be the proof .
- Grifta
Published 12th Aug 2024
Author's Note
Nathan , you were so happy and excited about this girl , I know you have had bad experiences in the past but you need to not let that lead you into a self destruction of what you are lucky enough to have found . I will always be there for ya but I can't control your actions of your past agony. You are a good guy and only when you doubt yourself you let your demons take control , do your best to silence that nagging Paranoia, enjoy what you have found and take what your due , you have suffered enough , this poems for you. I honestly wish I could take on your pain so you can enjoy it .
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12th Aug 2024 2:01pm
A very serious and caring poem; hope it helps Nate. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and love, Oral
