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Succubus
Hunger is my master
I am looking for my prey to satiate
his need
I am designed to seduce
to lure in
To make you want
what seems out of reach
I hear his voice pushing
There's one around the way
So Innocent
Like the new shine on an apple
Waiting for my teeth to sink into the supple skin
I can smell the innocence
Baby powder fresh
Step by step my pheromones release
The wind is at my back
Like a minion doing my bidding
Heads turn
My eyes are locked and focused on its target
Looking exaggeratedly
Evoking a response
Licking lips
Dilated pupils
Adjustment in the jeans
I walked up and said
“Do you?”
The question need not be finished
It was laced with sweet licorice
Head nodded
The body follows
Room 13
How it beckons to me
In awaken state
You did not hesitate
“REVEAL YOUR SELF”
Compulsion into pleasing
I feel it releasing
My outer shell is replaced
Taken over by another face
“LOOK AND YOU WILL SEE”
Two pupils split in tormented
Ecstasy.
Enjoying your arousal
I claw my way up
Your screams are stolen
As I begin to suck
Confusion hits your mind
Your climatic debut
Begins to climb
“No,No, Stop!”
He cried
I cannot stop the beast
When it's let outside
Body is rising
Please rising
The succubus has risen
Teeth have descended
Into the sensitive flesh
Until the first round has ended
Releasing his member
Enjoying the taste
Passed out on my bed
Letting nothing go to waste
He will wake up thinking this is a dream
I will make sure he knows it's not
With every puncture wound
on his tight torso
I will never be forgotten.
I am looking for my prey to satiate
his need
I am designed to seduce
to lure in
To make you want
what seems out of reach
I hear his voice pushing
There's one around the way
So Innocent
Like the new shine on an apple
Waiting for my teeth to sink into the supple skin
I can smell the innocence
Baby powder fresh
Step by step my pheromones release
The wind is at my back
Like a minion doing my bidding
Heads turn
My eyes are locked and focused on its target
Looking exaggeratedly
Evoking a response
Licking lips
Dilated pupils
Adjustment in the jeans
I walked up and said
“Do you?”
The question need not be finished
It was laced with sweet licorice
Head nodded
The body follows
Room 13
How it beckons to me
In awaken state
You did not hesitate
“REVEAL YOUR SELF”
Compulsion into pleasing
I feel it releasing
My outer shell is replaced
Taken over by another face
“LOOK AND YOU WILL SEE”
Two pupils split in tormented
Ecstasy.
Enjoying your arousal
I claw my way up
Your screams are stolen
As I begin to suck
Confusion hits your mind
Your climatic debut
Begins to climb
“No,No, Stop!”
He cried
I cannot stop the beast
When it's let outside
Body is rising
Please rising
The succubus has risen
Teeth have descended
Into the sensitive flesh
Until the first round has ended
Releasing his member
Enjoying the taste
Passed out on my bed
Letting nothing go to waste
He will wake up thinking this is a dream
I will make sure he knows it's not
With every puncture wound
on his tight torso
I will never be forgotten.
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 11th Aug 2024
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Re. Succubus
11th Aug 2024 9:46pm
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11th Aug 2024 9:49pm
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11th Aug 2024 9:49pm
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11th Aug 2024 9:50pm
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11th Aug 2024 9:51pm
Re. Succubus
11th Aug 2024 10:42pm
Love the succubus image -- the fact she takes your very soul as she seduces is such a compelling theme. Great work!
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11th Aug 2024 10:49pm
Re. Succubus
11th Aug 2024 11:39pm
Scary & sexy all rolled up into one. Like those suspenseful, erotic thrillers that were turning up all over the place in the early 90's. The Crush, The Last Seduction, Basic Instinct, Sliver and so many more.
Great write my friend
xox
Great write my friend
xox
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11th Aug 2024 11:41pm
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11th Aug 2024 11:42pm
Re. Succubus
12th Aug 2024 2:21am
That's gonna leave a mark. Nicely done. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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12th Aug 2024 2:27am
Re. Succubus
12th Aug 2024 9:37am
Well written and pretty intense. I thought the most interesting part was the reminder moment at the end of it not being a dream. Good!
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12th Aug 2024 11:09am
Re. Succubus
12th Aug 2024 11:31am
Seems there could be a benefit to being the prey. You struck a nice balance in this.
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12th Aug 2024 12:11pm
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12th Aug 2024 12:30pm
You really did the Succubus justice.
"I will never be forgotten" > perfect last line for an amazing piece.
"I will never be forgotten" > perfect last line for an amazing piece.
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12th Aug 2024 12:53pm
Re. Succubus
12th Aug 2024 12:49pm
Your varied topics always make me think what else talents are you hiding? what is next might be much more amazing!
Happy to have you here in this website..Hamid
Happy to have you here in this website..Hamid
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12th Aug 2024 12:54pm
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12th Aug 2024 12:57pm
As long as one is enjoying themselves, like everybody else here,
Life will be cool, warmly friendly and peaceful with good company.
Thank you Fia.
Life will be cool, warmly friendly and peaceful with good company.
Thank you Fia.
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Re. Succubus
12th Aug 2024 6:13pm
Enjoyed this piece, especially
Teeth have descended
Into the sensitive flesh
Until the first round has ended
Releasing his member
Enjoying the taste
Passed out on my bed
Letting nothing go to waste
Teeth have descended
Into the sensitive flesh
Until the first round has ended
Releasing his member
Enjoying the taste
Passed out on my bed
Letting nothing go to waste
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12th Aug 2024 6:46pm
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