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disarmament
took me decades
to assemble my full armor
layers intricately woven
links fused by smothering pain
lightning flashes of agony
broken trust infusing each plate
all this...poured into its making
until it glowed with inner flames
it is...formidable
so when I disrobe...
removing it
...piece
by
piece...
baring my scarred vulnerability...
it is...
...no...
...small thing
approach...accordingly
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Re. disarmament
11th Aug 2024 1:49pm
Utterly lovely. Being vulnerable after being ready for battle is NOT a small thing! Beautifully expressed!
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Re: Re. disarmament
13th Aug 2024 4:30pm
I wonder sometimes if we ever remove it entirely...or only think we do. Always a bit on edge, ready to bolt for cover...
Re. disarmament
11th Aug 2024 2:29pm
Trust is never a small thing and takes bravery to reveal. Love the title and nicely worded, Willow.
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Re: Re. disarmament
13th Aug 2024 4:31pm
Some of us have the devil of a time giving it. Never to be taken lightly when we do
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Re. disarmament
12th Aug 2024 9:20am
A strong poem,,awesomely expressed. When we let our armour down we ought to be appreciated by that someone . Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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Re: Re. disarmament
13th Aug 2024 4:33pm
So hard to expose the tender underbelly. And too often betrayed when doing so
Re. disarmament
12th Aug 2024 11:52am
This is a Masterpiece dear sister mine. I truly believe vulnerabiltiy is strength and this piece speaks of strength 💖
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Re: Re. disarmament
13th Aug 2024 4:35pm
I am fully inclined to agree with you...despite the belief of bullies that see it as a weakness. I don't see them braving it... I'm learning to embrace my vulnerability, sis 💖
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Anonymous
12th Aug 2024 8:32pm
Wow Willow, powerful ink, yet written so softly, pain within you whispering. Brilliantly written. Purple luv & hugs 💜
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Re: Re. disarmament
13th Aug 2024 4:37pm
I wrote this rather as a plea to others...treat vulnerability with the respect it deserves. It's far too often abused