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Original Thought
Original Thought
The original
thought
makes a
mighty fine
stand
from which
to hang
those thoughts
made
by hand.
Only
the lightning
that
scours
the skies
can hope
to be there
when you
open your
eyes.
The original
thought
makes a
mighty fine
stand
from which
to hang
those thoughts
made
by hand.
Only
the lightning
that
scours
the skies
can hope
to be there
when you
open your
eyes.
Published 11th Aug 2024
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11th Aug 2024 2:19pm
This was really romantic, turtle. I loved how delicately you wove these bindings.
11th Aug 2024 8:51pm
5, 5, 5, 5....
You saw that?
It was a hogtie!
Damn...that is close reading.
Side/kick!
You saw that?
It was a hogtie!
Damn...that is close reading.
Side/kick!
12th Aug 2024 3:29am
12th Aug 2024 12:49pm
