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Truth Serum
How real can you be with a person
bullshit aside
Put these radical thoughts in your head like
fuck preconceived pride
Really real talking facts
not censored caring of perception
Be Offensive Speaking Truth
withno redacted reflection
The world’s full of dumb fucks
in howling applause like trained seals
Passionate mesmerized in stupidity
overzealous they can’t keep it real
Let alone common sense or critical thinking
to decipher deceptive holes in life
As if trapdoors in a world of unknowns
are labeled in black and white
Clenched in brawn I look out at crowds livid
in savage bottled disgust
To launch bronze chaos off to sea
with a chiseled roaming message of distrust
My back aches at times kneeling
aimed in unrefined new levels
To live life incognito in a world
filled with idiots and devils
Clearly I’m Discobolus too Brainy and clever
as you unravel bulbous intricacies of my mind
The fuck I gotta walk backwards for
to divvy La la la-la la la layered rhetoric in rhyme
My patience so short I’m blue faced
like an ailing Papa Smurf
Intent on choking the air outta simps
in metaphoric cantankerous hurt
Some vocab can’t be summed dumbed down
in cartoon to spoon-feed onions to toddlers
To affirm mapped complexity of this gargantuan sage
seriously why the fuck bother
I gotta role so Big no cap
I’m the captain now - in real life
Captain Caveman swinging clubs
busting head’s insight
Dummied down to the nub
just to portray the true answer in writes
This warrior in plight
has matching loaded arsenal of regards on site
A tap dancer in camo boots with the BiC
to get around worldly critical shit
Bring on the curtain call I’m more than capable
strapped ready to call it quits
Club’s closing in go home or get the slugger
with this riddled thought behind
Two course fingers in the air
guaranteed not to be confused as a peace sign
Take that one patriotic thumb whimpering
and shove it somewhere
This vigilante vent is to the world
absent of vigilant care
Demeanor V for Vendetta
until I’m proved wrong or 6 foot decease
Molotovs burnt on surrounding streets
exhaust in passionate screech
Road rage was the answer
navigating dystopian fast lanes of life
We’ll get there the wrong way
or one way furious roll the dice
The world needs to amend reform
as a permanent reset or lose
Awake in political alarm of liberty bells rung
without pressing snooze
PAUSE IN THAT NIGHTMARE SCENE
BACKUP TO FILTER BREAKING NEWS
Awake in political alarm of liberty bells rung
without pressing snooze
The world needs to amend reform
as a permanent reset or lose
We’ll get there the wrong way
or one way furious roll the dice
Road rage was the answer
navigating dystopian fast lanes of life
Molotovs burnt on surrounding streets
exhaust in passionate screech
Demeanor V for Vendetta
until I’m proved wrong or 6 foot decease
This vigilante vent is to the world
absent of vigilant care
Take that one patriotic thumb whimpering
and shove it somewhere
Two course fingers in the air
guaranteed not to be confused as a peace sign
Club’s closing in go home or get the slugger
with this riddled thought behind
Bring on the curtain call I’m more than capable
strapped ready to call it quits
A tap dancer in camo boots with the BiC
to get around worldly critical shit
This warrior in plight
has matching loaded arsenal of regards on site
Dummied down to the nub
just to portray the true answer in writes
Captain Caveman swinging clubs
busting head’s insight
I gotta role so Big no cap
I’m the captain now - in real life
To affirm mapped complexity of this gargantuan sage
seriously why the fuck bother
Some vocab can’t be summed dumbed down
in cartoon to spoon-feed onions to toddlers
Intent on choking the air outta simps
in metaphoric cantankerous hurt
My patience so short I’m blue faced
like an ailing Papa Smurf
The fuck I gotta walk backwards for
to divvy La la la-la la la layered rhetoric in rhyme
Clearly I’m Discobolus too Brainy and clever
as you unravel bulbous intricacies of my mind
To live life incognito in a world
filled with idiots and devils
My back aches at times kneeling
aimed in unrefined new levels
To launch bronze chaos off to sea
with a chiseled roaming message of distrust
Clenched in brawn I look out at crowds livid
in savage bottled disgust
As if trapdoors in a world of unknowns
are labeled in black and white
Let alone common sense or critical thinking
to decipher deceptive holes in life
Passionate mesmerized in stupidity
overzealous they can’t keep it real
The world’s full of dumb fucks
in howling applause like trained seals
Be Offensive Speaking Truth
withno redacted reflection
Really real talking facts
not censored caring of perception
Put these radical thoughts in your head like
fuck preconceived pride
How real can you be with a person
bullshit aside
bullshit aside
Put these radical thoughts in your head like
fuck preconceived pride
Really real talking facts
not censored caring of perception
Be Offensive Speaking Truth
with
The world’s full of dumb fucks
in howling applause like trained seals
Passionate mesmerized in stupidity
overzealous they can’t keep it real
Let alone common sense or critical thinking
to decipher deceptive holes in life
As if trapdoors in a world of unknowns
are labeled in black and white
Clenched in brawn I look out at crowds livid
in savage bottled disgust
To launch bronze chaos off to sea
with a chiseled roaming message of distrust
My back aches at times kneeling
aimed in unrefined new levels
To live life incognito in a world
filled with idiots and devils
Clearly I’m Discobolus too Brainy and clever
as you unravel bulbous intricacies of my mind
The fuck I gotta walk backwards for
to divvy La la la-la la la layered rhetoric in rhyme
My patience so short I’m blue faced
like an ailing Papa Smurf
Intent on choking the air outta simps
in metaphoric cantankerous hurt
Some vocab can’t be summed dumbed down
in cartoon to spoon-feed onions to toddlers
To affirm mapped complexity of this gargantuan sage
seriously why the fuck bother
I gotta role so Big no cap
I’m the captain now - in real life
Captain Caveman swinging clubs
busting head’s insight
Dummied down to the nub
just to portray the true answer in writes
This warrior in plight
has matching loaded arsenal of regards on site
A tap dancer in camo boots with the BiC
to get around worldly critical shit
Bring on the curtain call I’m more than capable
strapped ready to call it quits
Club’s closing in go home or get the slugger
with this riddled thought behind
Two course fingers in the air
guaranteed not to be confused as a peace sign
Take that one patriotic thumb whimpering
and shove it somewhere
This vigilante vent is to the world
absent of vigilant care
Demeanor V for Vendetta
until I’m proved wrong or 6 foot decease
Molotovs burnt on surrounding streets
exhaust in passionate screech
Road rage was the answer
navigating dystopian fast lanes of life
We’ll get there the wrong way
or one way furious roll the dice
The world needs to amend reform
as a permanent reset or lose
Awake in political alarm of liberty bells rung
without pressing snooze
PAUSE IN THAT NIGHTMARE SCENE
BACKUP TO FILTER BREAKING NEWS
Awake in political alarm of liberty bells rung
without pressing snooze
The world needs to amend reform
as a permanent reset or lose
We’ll get there the wrong way
or one way furious roll the dice
Road rage was the answer
navigating dystopian fast lanes of life
Molotovs burnt on surrounding streets
exhaust in passionate screech
Demeanor V for Vendetta
until I’m proved wrong or 6 foot decease
This vigilante vent is to the world
absent of vigilant care
Take that one patriotic thumb whimpering
and shove it somewhere
Two course fingers in the air
guaranteed not to be confused as a peace sign
Club’s closing in go home or get the slugger
with this riddled thought behind
Bring on the curtain call I’m more than capable
strapped ready to call it quits
A tap dancer in camo boots with the BiC
to get around worldly critical shit
This warrior in plight
has matching loaded arsenal of regards on site
Dummied down to the nub
just to portray the true answer in writes
Captain Caveman swinging clubs
busting head’s insight
I gotta role so Big no cap
I’m the captain now - in real life
To affirm mapped complexity of this gargantuan sage
seriously why the fuck bother
Some vocab can’t be summed dumbed down
in cartoon to spoon-feed onions to toddlers
Intent on choking the air outta simps
in metaphoric cantankerous hurt
My patience so short I’m blue faced
like an ailing Papa Smurf
The fuck I gotta walk backwards for
to divvy La la la-la la la layered rhetoric in rhyme
Clearly I’m Discobolus too Brainy and clever
as you unravel bulbous intricacies of my mind
To live life incognito in a world
filled with idiots and devils
My back aches at times kneeling
aimed in unrefined new levels
To launch bronze chaos off to sea
with a chiseled roaming message of distrust
Clenched in brawn I look out at crowds livid
in savage bottled disgust
As if trapdoors in a world of unknowns
are labeled in black and white
Let alone common sense or critical thinking
to decipher deceptive holes in life
Passionate mesmerized in stupidity
overzealous they can’t keep it real
The world’s full of dumb fucks
in howling applause like trained seals
Be Offensive Speaking Truth
with
Really real talking facts
not censored caring of perception
Put these radical thoughts in your head like
fuck preconceived pride
How real can you be with a person
bullshit aside
Published 9th Aug 2024
| Edited 19th Feb 2025
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9th Aug 2024 5:18pm
New and interesting content and approach. Thanks for sharing your talent. Hugs and love, Oral
9th Aug 2024 8:52pm
9th Aug 2024 9:57pm
I look forward to more great poems. Have a great WRITE day. Hugs and love, Oral
21st Aug 2024 9:14pm
This makes me think of everything to do Mr. Robot ( if you haven’t seen it, WATCH IT, because this poem resonates with most of the things he’s trying to change.
22nd Aug 2024 2:08am
I’ll have to check that out, the trailer looks interesting. Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
