Breathless mention

Love how the pic tied into the poem. Fia xoxo

Thanks Fia :) I like to add something visual to set the mood

This is succinctly powerful, you have the gift of the abstract depiction..Hamid best wishes

Thanks Hamid. I appreciate your feedback

Succinct, & yet powerful. And perhaps powerful because it's succinct.

Thank you. I was trying to see if I could contain the emotion of a powerful subject in 20 words. Appreciate the RL add :)