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The Road to Nowhere
She ties off
She shoots up, naked
She don't like to be touched appropriately
When he comes home blasted,
He hits her
She likes it
When their both sober
She helps him to hate himself,
More then he already does
He wants her to so badly touch him
She goes on all the time saying that she feels used & abused
They have both died too many times
She shoots up, naked
She don't like to be touched appropriately
When he comes home blasted,
He hits her
She likes it
When their both sober
She helps him to hate himself,
More then he already does
He wants her to so badly touch him
She goes on all the time saying that she feels used & abused
They have both died too many times
Published 2nd Aug 2024
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2nd Aug 2024 8:12pm
Two broken people, portrayed here. Nice description of what they want from each other but cannot really give
2nd Aug 2024 9:17pm
That's right. Addiction is never a two way street.
Thanks for reading & commenting
Thanks for reading & commenting
2nd Aug 2024 8:21pm
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2nd Aug 2024 9:22pm
Thank you for the RL and the feedback. Hopefully living through those tough times made you a stronger person.
2nd Aug 2024 9:24pm
2nd Aug 2024 9:27pm
I understand. We look back, learn and understand as we mature and age.
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2nd Aug 2024 10:53pm
I'm happy to hear this one resonated with you. It's a shame what people can do towards one another & claim they love them. It's terrible.
I love you too...
xox
I love you too...
xox
3rd Aug 2024 1:49am
This is what it can be like for sure (not me personally). My 2 best friends in high school (M&F), always something between them, sometimes violence.
3rd Aug 2024 10:54am
So many out there that can relate to this poem. Thanks for your comments!
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