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Paradise Lost

Two pieces of a broken dream
Left floating on a summer stream
A diamond waiting in despair
Beneath the liquid laissez-faire

Simple peace and aching need
Imperiled by a jealous breed
Little fragments lost in time
Forgotten details of their rhyme

A modest sum that leads to two
Became a whole that wasn't true
Maybe value isn't real
Or something we weren't meant to feel

Where has all the yearning gone?
It fleeted as a frightened fawn
That ran into the darkened wood
As if it's grace misunderstood

If nature gave us something strong
A jewel, a will, a sacred song
Then why is it what we've begun
Has left our paradise undone?
Written by OnlySorrow44 (Wishes)
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Author's Note
It's sad how easy we let things go. Maybe it wasn't 'the real thing', but it was nice.
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