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implosion (a shrinking poem)

You come untethered
I would burn the world
just to be by your side
as this apocalypse
rips you apart

You come untethered
I burn the world
just to be by your side
as this apocalypse
rips you apart

You come untethered
I burn the world
just to be
as this apocalypse
rips you apart

You come untethered
I burn
as this apocalypse
rips you apart

You come untethered
your apocalypse
rips me apart

Written by Indie

(Miss Indie)

Published 31st Jul 2024

Author's Note

Playing around

#LifeStruggles

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Re. implosion (a shrinking poem)

Betty

31st Jul 2024 2:06pm

Holy fuckshit. The way every stanza had a different nuance, a new meaning was utterly glorious. I had to read a few times, inflecting in new ways each time for each line. It gave serious depth to what could have been a stand-alone in just stanza 1.

Damn.

And the way it ended.

DAY-AM!

Brilliant, as usual.