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Senryu - Haz Lo
Sad to say they died
doing what they didn't love
each moment precious
doing what they didn't love
each moment precious
Published 28th Jul 2024
Author's Note
An attempt to self-cheer. I was watching women's Olympic Surfing from absolutely awe inspiringly beautiful Tahiti. It brought me peace seeing these souls doing what they truly love to do in such a splendid setting. Time to pivot to the light.
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28th Jul 2024 10:34am
Dear GW,
I think the message is a great one with this lovely write. I enjoyed reading the inspiration for the piece as well. Now I want to hop the next flight to Tahiti. I’d even take up surfing but I’d rather just hit the beach and hang ten. Fab write. H🌷
I think the message is a great one with this lovely write. I enjoyed reading the inspiration for the piece as well. Now I want to hop the next flight to Tahiti. I’d even take up surfing but I’d rather just hit the beach and hang ten. Fab write. H🌷
29th Jul 2024 1:31am
ˇMuchisimas Gracias, Honoria❣ Believe me, I'd be on the towel or chaise lounge right next to you ...would an umbrella garnished drink be too cliche? Nope, bring it on🥰
