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Kissing
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.
Inspired by Ms LaCarte’s (Lipskiss) butterfly kisses:
Kissing
All night and every night
Sounds a bit tiring I say
Kissing is so much lighter
Easy: all day - every day
W27jul2024
Thank you for the inspiration!
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
Inspired by Ms LaCarte’s (Lipskiss) butterfly kisses:
Kissing
All night and every night
Sounds a bit tiring I say
Kissing is so much lighter
Easy: all day - every day
W27jul2024
Thank you for the inspiration!
Kind regards, Gus
Author's Note
Inspired by Ms. laCarte’s poem: Lipskiss
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Re. Kissing
27th Jul 2024 11:43am
All day, every day….
I think I’d be okay with that.
So good to see you post, Gus 😊
I think I’d be okay with that.
So good to see you post, Gus 😊
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Re: Re. Kissing
27th Jul 2024 6:41pm
Hoi hoi
At my age, 10 times per night?
Who am I kidding?
But snogging (as they say in the UK - I believe US is French kissing) 20 per day, deep, warm and meaningful with hands and all…..
easy!
Like it that you stop by. It means a lot to me. Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
At my age, 10 times per night?
Who am I kidding?
But snogging (as they say in the UK - I believe US is French kissing) 20 per day, deep, warm and meaningful with hands and all…..
easy!
Like it that you stop by. It means a lot to me. Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
Re: Re. Kissing
27th Jul 2024 6:42pm
Hoi hoi
I like it a lot that you read this and posted a reaction. Thank you very much!
Kind regards, Gus
I like it a lot that you read this and posted a reaction. Thank you very much!
Kind regards, Gus
Re. Kissing
1st Aug 2024 5:15am
Re: Re. Kissing
1st Aug 2024 9:59am
Hoi hoi
Thank you so much.
I hope to be inspiring you too.
Use it or lose/loose (don’t know which) it is definitely a thing.
And thank you for coming around and read it.
Kind regards, Gus
Thank you so much.
I hope to be inspiring you too.
Use it or lose/loose (don’t know which) it is definitely a thing.
And thank you for coming around and read it.
Kind regards, Gus
Re. Kissing
21st Aug 2024 4:09pm
Re: Re. Kissing
21st Aug 2024 6:22pm
Hoi hoi
There are things that we do naturally when we fall in love. One way or another we seem to forget how much fun it is to keep on doing what we love and what we’re good at.
Let them laugh behind their hands. There’s not enough snogging going around.
I hope you get your share.
Thanks for reading!
Kind regards, Gus
There are things that we do naturally when we fall in love. One way or another we seem to forget how much fun it is to keep on doing what we love and what we’re good at.
Let them laugh behind their hands. There’s not enough snogging going around.
I hope you get your share.
Thanks for reading!
Kind regards, Gus
Re. Kissing
3rd Oct 2024 2:15pm
This one made me smile, what a lovely little piece.
I'm a morning person, so morning kisses are my favorite. I do love variation, so day and night.
...as long as it's daily I'm fine :-D
I'm a morning person, so morning kisses are my favorite. I do love variation, so day and night.
...as long as it's daily I'm fine :-D
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Re. Kissing
5th Oct 2024 5:46pm
Hoi hoi
Ahhh. Dank Je wel!
Thank you so much for you lovely comment.
At a certain age (like mine for instance) is keeping the flame alive, and succeeding, a feast.
And a feast to celebrate every day.
I wholeheartedly wish this kind of happiness and lovingness (is that English at all?) to all of you and jou in het bijzonder.
Houden van is een werkwoord.
Loving is a verb.
Dank je voor je comment.
Vriendelijke groet, Gus
Ahhh. Dank Je wel!
Thank you so much for you lovely comment.
At a certain age (like mine for instance) is keeping the flame alive, and succeeding, a feast.
And a feast to celebrate every day.
I wholeheartedly wish this kind of happiness and lovingness (is that English at all?) to all of you and jou in het bijzonder.
Houden van is een werkwoord.
Loving is a verb.
Dank je voor je comment.
Vriendelijke groet, Gus