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Don’t Tell Me
They all tell me our love will never last.
Don’t care. I’ve had a few like that in the past.
I just want someone younger to have a blast.
I'm not looking for anyone as steadfast.
I’m looking for a guy with a hell of a mast.
Who can grind my pussy and outlast.
I’m well aware some of my beauty has passed.
Still, I have much much more I can broadcast.
Who are you to put me in a caste.
To judge me as a slut or an outcast.
I am a woman who’s been harassed.
Until all hopes have been smashed.
Don’t tell me to die or that my age has passed.
I want to live and enjoy life to the last.
That’s all I want. That’s all I’ve ever asked.
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Re. Don’t Tell Me
26th Jul 2024 8:04pm
Love that you are so in tuned with the female point of view. I can feel the aggravation of getting older and how you meld the erotism into it. ;)
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26th Jul 2024 8:07pm
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26th Jul 2024 8:10pm
Re. Don’t Tell Me
Why does her beauty have to be passed just because she’s aged?
Other than that…delish poem, Sam.
Other than that…delish poem, Sam.
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26th Jul 2024 8:30pm
oh no... her beauty did not pass.... unfortunately that is what she thinks.... or that's what some people think... beauty doesn't pass... it is transformed into more beauty... (is my head still on or did you chop it off already???)
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26th Jul 2024 8:33pm
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26th Jul 2024 8:34pm
euuuu.... thank god im still in one piece ... I changed it for you... what do you think of her beauty now?
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26th Jul 2024 8:35pm
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26th Jul 2024 8:38pm
if I don't take criticism and change it for the better ... I should not be here
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26th Jul 2024 8:37pm
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26th Jul 2024 8:43pm
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26th Jul 2024 9:55pm
I enjoyed the direct language in which you chose to write this lifestyle poem, Sam.
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26th Jul 2024 10:26pm
Re. Don’t Tell Me
27th Jul 2024 00:18am
What else is more important...great, as usual, UP creator...so womanly...Hugs and love, Oral
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Re: Re. Don’t Tell Me
27th Jul 2024 00:39am
Thanks… I also enjoyed writing this. It does give you a whole new perspective on life
Re. Don’t Tell Me
27th Jul 2024 5:30am
I Love how you're able to put yourself in the heels of woman...
...thinks back about the day I found out you were a man 😅 (how naive)
...thinks back about the day I found out you were a man 😅 (how naive)
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27th Jul 2024 6:01am
You just gave an idea… I’m going to try wearing high heels… you just ruined my manhood you know
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15th Aug 2024 4:13am