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M'lady Moon
wings glisten upon a breeze
gentle murmurs as feathers fan
soft calls in low-throated hum
windblown whispers between ancient trees
their creak & moan stirs the blood
as breath held in anticipation is released
darkness shimmers beneath her glow
& night swoons
pulse racing at her silver lacing
M'lady Moon comes
Published 24th Jul 2024
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24th Jul 2024 7:53pm
24th Jul 2024 8:08pm
25th Jul 2024 2:52am
I do love the ethereal way you write about night. Good luck, sweet friend, in the comp!
25th Jul 2024 1:22pm
Night is my sanctuary. Shadows have always been allies for me. And the moon my ruling force. Thank you so much, Betty!
25th Jul 2024 8:21am
As someone who has a close connection with the moon, I love this little tribute to the moon, sis 💖
25th Jul 2024 1:24pm
It feels like a very small tribute indeed, but it needs no more said. She is sublime. Thank you so much, sis 💖
25th Jul 2024 12:16pm
25th Jul 2024 1:24pm
A tribute to the moon, personalifying it, with faintly erotic undertones, eg these lines:
gentle murmurs as feathers fan
soft calls in low-throated hum
their creak & moan stirs the blood
as breath held in anticipation is released
gentle murmurs as feathers fan
soft calls in low-throated hum
their creak & moan stirs the blood
as breath held in anticipation is released
27th Jul 2024 10:53pm
I'm happy you picked up on those undertones. Sometimes I think I'm too subtle. Thank you so much, Solomon_Song
31st Jul 2024 1:44am
Awesome! Brevity never had such heft as this write.
Actually poetry! Great results, Willow.
Actually poetry! Great results, Willow.
31st Jul 2024 4:58pm
I am pure Moonchild. Don't get me started on M'lady...I can ramble like nobody's business. This one I kept short. Thank you so much, Styxian
