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*Noah Revisited*
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The Devil was dancing all night
and at dawn God screamed:
That's enough!
Why are my churches empty?
Maybe I'll have to get tough.....
The Devil was dancing all night
and at dawn God screamed:
That's enough!
Why are my churches empty?
Maybe I'll have to get tough.....
Published 23rd Jul 2024
| Edited 18th Aug 2024
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26th Jul 2024 10:44am
Hoi hoi
Self mocking, humor, serious things too….
Witty remarks, very good and catching melody lines…
I guess that by now you guess which direction I’m going. You music resonates me like crazy.
I’ll send an application for becoming the chairman of your fanclub.
Do I likethis? No I love it to bits.
Kind regards, Gus
Self mocking, humor, serious things too….
Witty remarks, very good and catching melody lines…
I guess that by now you guess which direction I’m going. You music resonates me like crazy.
I’ll send an application for becoming the chairman of your fanclub.
Do I likethis? No I love it to bits.
Kind regards, Gus
