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dregs of a disordered mind
thinking I haven’t fallen over
for ages, despite feeling
unsteady on my feet, it’s the
confusion in my head that
makes me fall over and over
again I say sorry to my legs
Published 22nd Jul 2024
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22nd Jul 2024 1:53am
The flow is fantastic, well written.
“Head, again, legs” has a beautiful trinity when combined in the way this poem has.
“Head, again, legs” has a beautiful trinity when combined in the way this poem has.
22nd Jul 2024 11:38pm
thank you, for your very kind comment; structure in a poem is important, even when it’s not immediately apparent, and I’m grateful you looked closely at it ..
23rd Jul 2024 00:50am
I love that you recognize the source instead of being bitter toward your legs. So many others are.
23rd Jul 2024 1:05am
