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My Kaleidoscope
Look into my kaleidoscope can't you see
all the colors are going around towards me
just like the world outside, people... they run and hide
Look into my kaleidoscope it's a dream
is your mind just playing tricks does it seem
just like the world outside, people... they run and hide
Cindy selling seashells by the seashore
seashells selling Cindy by the seashore
Is this reality within your mind?
ocean's drift from the world behind
Look into my kaleidoscope can't you see
is your mind just playing tricks does it seem
just like the world outside, people... they run and hide
all the colors are going around towards me
just like the world outside, people... they run and hide
Look into my kaleidoscope it's a dream
is your mind just playing tricks does it seem
just like the world outside, people... they run and hide
Cindy selling seashells by the seashore
seashells selling Cindy by the seashore
Is this reality within your mind?
ocean's drift from the world behind
Look into my kaleidoscope can't you see
is your mind just playing tricks does it seem
just like the world outside, people... they run and hide
Published 19th Jul 2024
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19th Jul 2024 12:04pm
Very dream like.
I like - "Is this reality within your mind, oceans drift from the world behind
I like - "Is this reality within your mind, oceans drift from the world behind
19th Jul 2024 1:03pm
19th Jul 2024 1:33pm
If they keep running and hiding in every world, then your doing everything right. Dominate them! Haha great piece of work!
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19th Jul 2024 4:03pm
I like the lyrical feel of this. I'm fantasizing about musicians I'd like to have perform it. Ever heard of Zero 7? They are coming to mind. As I'm interpreting the people run and hide refrain, it's like you can line someone up in the sights of the kaleidoscope, but they'll instantly shift into a different pattern- they can't be depended on.
Intriguing piece. Love the picture too.
Intriguing piece. Love the picture too.
19th Jul 2024 4:11pm
Thank you. I heard of Zero 7. Aren't they an electronic band? Had a few kaleidoscopes as a kid.
Appreciate the comments. Thank you!
Appreciate the comments. Thank you!
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