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A Shade Not So Blue
Wishful thinking on a cloudy day
Not really looking forward to rain
Bright sky overwhelmed with grey
Mother nature washes away pain
Simple things are delightfully grand
How flavors blend when combined
Drink in your hand, toes in the sand
Reflected by this cozy state of mind
Forget about life every now and then
Do something meaningful and true
Bathe in the light cast away this skin
Until we find a shade not so blue
Not really looking forward to rain
Bright sky overwhelmed with grey
Mother nature washes away pain
Simple things are delightfully grand
How flavors blend when combined
Drink in your hand, toes in the sand
Reflected by this cozy state of mind
Forget about life every now and then
Do something meaningful and true
Bathe in the light cast away this skin
Until we find a shade not so blue
Published 19th Jul 2024
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19th Jul 2024 6:10am
Dear DL,
Lovely. Just the ticket to remind us to find the thing that will bring joy. Second stanza, I can smell the ocean and feel the calming effects already. I really enjoyed this piece. H🌷
Lovely. Just the ticket to remind us to find the thing that will bring joy. Second stanza, I can smell the ocean and feel the calming effects already. I really enjoyed this piece. H🌷
19th Jul 2024 9:52pm
Thanks so much for your commentary and kind words. Means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
19th Jul 2024 7:59am
Wonderful poem. I really enjoyed the flow. Reminds me of an album title from Anathema: "We're here because we're here". Sometimes being here is all that is needed.
19th Jul 2024 9:54pm
Thanks so much for your commentary and kind words. Most of all the RL. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
19th Jul 2024 1:47pm
19th Jul 2024 9:55pm
Thanks so much for your commentary and the RL. Means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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- Edited 31st Jul 2024 7:45pm
19th Jul 2024 1:54pm
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19th Jul 2024 9:56pm
Thanks so much for your commentary and kind words. Means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
19th Jul 2024 10:02pm
19th Jul 2024 10:10pm
20th Jul 2024 2:41am
20th Jul 2024 3:45am
Thanks so much for your commentary. It means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
