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The Other Side of Bitch
You think with your dick
like you're in a competition
to be a dirty old man
I'm fed up with being fucked
the same way you swig a beer
I faked all those orgasms
every damn one
sat through boring football games
wiped your dirty mess
from my favorite dress
when you pleaded for a quickie
in the car
I gave you my best years
to put up with your drunken
insane mother
and when she dies
I'm gonna dance on her grave
and sing
You're a taker who never gives
you've turned me into a machine
that cooks and cleans and
cooks and cleans
I'm a slave to your whole filthy
brood
Normal people
take vacation every year
but not us
It's so long since we took a break
no wonder I screwed the mailman last week
and your revolting brother
who else would put up with
a boring jerk like you
You can buy a new bed
and throw out that fleabag couch
because from now on
you're sleeping permanently
downstairs--
If you were a woman
you'd be the world's worst
bitch
Published 22nd Feb 2010
| Edited 15th Nov 2016
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Anonymous
23rd Feb 2010 10:03am
viewpoint, and you convey the character really really well.
23rd Feb 2010 10:11am
I had it in my mind to balance Bitch I at some stage - but our tete a tete pushed me off the cliff and this was the result. The perils of being a commentator on love gone wrong! Thanks for the nudge and your kind feedback, Jack.
Anonymous
23rd Feb 2010 8:21pm
as you suggest there are indeed 2 sides to every story.
The most telling line for me is
'I gave you my best years'..
Indeed, a successful marriage is almost like a transaction where both parties give up something of personal value.
Good poem with nice rhythyms.
Steven
The most telling line for me is
'I gave you my best years'..
Indeed, a successful marriage is almost like a transaction where both parties give up something of personal value.
Good poem with nice rhythyms.
Steven
23rd Feb 2010 8:43pm
Yes, "I gave you my best years" can come up quite often - and a man would never say that to a woman would they. I think I better write something lighthearted after all my recent bitchery. I have found it quite a heavy vibe to absorb. Thanks for the kind feedback, Steven.
Anonymous
23rd Feb 2010 9:10pm
Abra, you are the most articulate and expressive 'bitch' that I have known..
lol
S
lol
S
23rd Feb 2010 10:17pm
Anonymous
23rd Feb 2010 10:39pm
Not so!
Moreover all the bitches I know spout incoherent rubbish.
(I only know 2 bitches though! lol, the rest are ladies of the highest order)
Moreover all the bitches I know spout incoherent rubbish.
(I only know 2 bitches though! lol, the rest are ladies of the highest order)
