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Rage
When I came here I was wide eye’d and naïve
Thinking that I would get everything that I need
But what I got was more than I thought
I didn't wanna get into the shit others brought
I couldn't stay away as much as I tried
died a little bit every day as I cried
who put this shit on me I want to know
38 caliber will let the words flow
Spilling any blood was not my intention
All these whispers and all these deceptions
I am not the one you want to play with
If you want to show your claws they all will be clipped
Look into my eyes can you see the dark
As I choke the life out of you
extinguish your spark
You wanted to push, and you wanted to prod
My last advice to you pray to your god
Are you feeling the heat from these words that I spit
It comes deep within my lava pit
Thinking that I would get everything that I need
But what I got was more than I thought
I didn't wanna get into the shit others brought
I couldn't stay away as much as I tried
died a little bit every day as I cried
who put this shit on me I want to know
38 caliber will let the words flow
Spilling any blood was not my intention
All these whispers and all these deceptions
I am not the one you want to play with
If you want to show your claws they all will be clipped
Look into my eyes can you see the dark
As I choke the life out of you
extinguish your spark
You wanted to push, and you wanted to prod
My last advice to you pray to your god
Are you feeling the heat from these words that I spit
It comes deep within my lava pit
Author's Note
Is this the end of this feeling? Doubt it.
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Re. Rage
14th Jul 2024 10:39pm
What did we switch bodies this afternoon? I'm writing about love & your writing this piece I can see myself putting together. Great fucking poem Fia. The anger & hatred is captured brilliantly. Nice work!!
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15th Jul 2024 1:52am
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15th Jul 2024 1:59am
You know I like this one Cuzzo! Really glad you posted. Well written. Always happy to see another layer being pulled back. 🙂 ❤️
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15th Jul 2024 2:02am
Thank you cuz. I was in that head space when I wrote it. Thanks for the RL🦋❤️
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15th Jul 2024 3:45am
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15th Jul 2024 12:40pm
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15th Jul 2024 12:40pm
Re. Rage
You are Brave, clean, and courageous, naive in your interactions may drag you into trouble, regarded ignorant...
We have always to spare a margin of ourselves in case, we must give what we have but with much caution, and
discretion...Showing our whole personality can be taken against us..
A fine spill of a poetic rage, to clean the veins, and feel calm..
Stay safe and happy always mu dear friend..
We have always to spare a margin of ourselves in case, we must give what we have but with much caution, and
discretion...Showing our whole personality can be taken against us..
A fine spill of a poetic rage, to clean the veins, and feel calm..
Stay safe and happy always mu dear friend..
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15th Jul 2024 12:41pm
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15th Jul 2024 4:04pm
Rage is good… it gets the blood pumping a little … but then the trick is how do you make it work to your advantage
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15th Jul 2024 4:07pm
That is true. I think of a couple of productive ways to work off that rage.
(Some not sexual but still vigorous) Thank you Sam
(Some not sexual but still vigorous) Thank you Sam