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I Think I'm in Love
she was cute
she was young
with hair down to her bum
she dressed naughty
she was drunk at the party
me and my friends
didn’t know what to expect
when she came up to us
wanting a thrill
the kind only guys like us could give
I took her out back
while my friends got the car ready
bent her over a hobo
lifted up her skirt
fucked her ass until cum came rolling out
back at the apartment
my friends took turns
I was out in the living room
popping pills and stroking my cock
I wanted to be ready
so when I got her I would last longer
she came out of the room
out of breath and covered in jizz
I said ‘let me wash you off’
dragged her to the bathroom
then dunked her head in the toilet
she seemed a bit shocked
I asked “what do you do for a living?”
-‘I’m a nymphomaniac!’
wasn’t sure what that meant
either way
I put my dick against her nostril then peed
back in the room she did every nasty thing
her pronouns were dp, tp, and dap
she was gushing from her pussy
all my friends were out of breath
but not me
I kept fucking her like a beast
totally ignoring her slit
my mission was to destroy her ass
so I gripping tight to her hips
I gave it my all
my nuts were sore from cumming so much
even as we took breaks
she just kept playing with her pussy
having orgasm after orgasm
at the end of the night
we formed a circle around her
having her suck our dicks for one last jizz
I told her ‘hold open yours lids’
we took turns busting a nut in her eyes
after I gripped her hair then threw her out
p.s. I think I’m in love
she was young
with hair down to her bum
she dressed naughty
she was drunk at the party
me and my friends
didn’t know what to expect
when she came up to us
wanting a thrill
the kind only guys like us could give
I took her out back
while my friends got the car ready
bent her over a hobo
lifted up her skirt
fucked her ass until cum came rolling out
back at the apartment
my friends took turns
I was out in the living room
popping pills and stroking my cock
I wanted to be ready
so when I got her I would last longer
she came out of the room
out of breath and covered in jizz
I said ‘let me wash you off’
dragged her to the bathroom
then dunked her head in the toilet
she seemed a bit shocked
I asked “what do you do for a living?”
-‘I’m a nymphomaniac!’
wasn’t sure what that meant
either way
I put my dick against her nostril then peed
back in the room she did every nasty thing
her pronouns were dp, tp, and dap
she was gushing from her pussy
all my friends were out of breath
but not me
I kept fucking her like a beast
totally ignoring her slit
my mission was to destroy her ass
so I gripping tight to her hips
I gave it my all
my nuts were sore from cumming so much
even as we took breaks
she just kept playing with her pussy
having orgasm after orgasm
at the end of the night
we formed a circle around her
having her suck our dicks for one last jizz
I told her ‘hold open yours lids’
we took turns busting a nut in her eyes
after I gripped her hair then threw her out
p.s. I think I’m in love
Published 11th Jul 2024
Author's Note
Wish this was a true story haha
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11th Jul 2024 11:57am
11th Jul 2024 3:25pm
21st Jul 2024 8:27pm
Ugh, that’s how you get pink eye.
Applause for rolling in the fantasy. The pee in the nose… gotta admit it took me this long to comment because of nose pee.
Go you!
Applause for rolling in the fantasy. The pee in the nose… gotta admit it took me this long to comment because of nose pee.
Go you!
22nd Jul 2024 10:09am
Haha. I think I got the idea from reading an older poem of mine. I used to write a lot more darker and extreme erotica. My over all goal was just thinking up things I haven't wrote about before. Also wanted to have a feel of a normal night going into some crazy stuff.
Thanks for the read. Wash, rinse, repeat.
Thanks for the read. Wash, rinse, repeat.
