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Hair on the back of my neck
Bite for my lips to peel
Bruises mostly teal
Reactions unable to heal
Periphreal vision clear
It's not true just because I feel
Can't trust what I hear
Always sure someone's near
Lay on the bed nerves on third gear
Never too long without watching rear
Free of terror but live in sheer
Trust my gut even when it's not real
Bruises mostly teal
Reactions unable to heal
Periphreal vision clear
It's not true just because I feel
Can't trust what I hear
Always sure someone's near
Lay on the bed nerves on third gear
Never too long without watching rear
Free of terror but live in sheer
Trust my gut even when it's not real
Published 7th Jul 2024
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7th Jul 2024 11:36pm
Good and disquietening ... rhyme.
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Most of us have had gut feelings, emotional weird feelings, instincts, intuitions in our lives,...
... we never brush them off as irrational.
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Most of us have had gut feelings, emotional weird feelings, instincts, intuitions in our lives,...
... we never brush them off as irrational.
7th Jul 2024 11:39pm
Thank you for commenting, I do battle with myself how to distinguish paranoia from previous experiences and how they shape us
9th Jul 2024 11:52pm
You're welcome, fightorflight (Disa).
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That's a beautifully perfect exercise,...
... then you can *shape* poetry, tales, novels, movie scripts... ...
... 👍
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That's a beautifully perfect exercise,...
... then you can *shape* poetry, tales, novels, movie scripts... ...
... 👍
