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Trust’s a two way street of understanding
It’s all part of the feeling out process
Some people can’t stick the landing
Measured by desire they call success
Under the disguise known as vanity
Is a hunger to rule over individuals
Tangled within webs that feed insanity
Profiting off the collected residuals
Silence is demanded upon arrival
Simple rules of any doomsday cult
Important when seeking survival
Loyalty bleeds for a desired result
Sitting beneath a zombie moon
Watching aliens invade humankind
Force-fed D.N.A. from a spoon
While society remains willfully blind
Whose really to blame at the end of a day
Guess it’s the guilty who wanted to stay
It’s all part of the feeling out process
Some people can’t stick the landing
Measured by desire they call success
Under the disguise known as vanity
Is a hunger to rule over individuals
Tangled within webs that feed insanity
Profiting off the collected residuals
Silence is demanded upon arrival
Simple rules of any doomsday cult
Important when seeking survival
Loyalty bleeds for a desired result
Sitting beneath a zombie moon
Watching aliens invade humankind
Force-fed D.N.A. from a spoon
While society remains willfully blind
Whose really to blame at the end of a day
Guess it’s the guilty who wanted to stay
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Re. Stay
5th Jul 2024 9:34pm
Wow! Lots to think about and soul search with honesty. Thanks for sharing your talent. Hugs and love, Oral
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5th Jul 2024 9:36pm
Re. Stay
5th Jul 2024 9:54pm
"Under the disguise known as vanity
Is a hunger to rule over individuals
Tangled within webs that feed insanity
Profiting off the collected residuals"
Incredibly put. Profiting off the collected residuals. Fia xoxo
Is a hunger to rule over individuals
Tangled within webs that feed insanity
Profiting off the collected residuals"
Incredibly put. Profiting off the collected residuals. Fia xoxo
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Re: Re. Stay
5th Jul 2024 9:58pm
Thanks so much for your wonderful commentary. My favorite verse as well. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. Stay
5th Jul 2024 11:10pm
This is a beautiful piece of poetry. So resonant and well thought, this one will stick with me. Thank you so much for sharing 💜
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Re: Re. Stay
6th Jul 2024 2:50am
Thanks so much for your wonderful commentary. Made my day. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. Stay
6th Jul 2024 2:39am
This is a great piece of poetry . I can get super judgy about rhyme, you handed this beautifully
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Re: Re. Stay
6th Jul 2024 2:52am
Thanks so much for your commentary. I'm glad you enjoyed. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. Stay
6th Jul 2024 8:44am
Dear D,
The first stanza is very powerful. Broken trust for me, is a lifetime of healing. Delving into human behavior and the layers of action, inaction and despair was fabulously executed in this piece. H🌷
The first stanza is very powerful. Broken trust for me, is a lifetime of healing. Delving into human behavior and the layers of action, inaction and despair was fabulously executed in this piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. Stay
6th Jul 2024 7:51pm
Thanks so much once again for your wonderful commentary. Made my day. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. Stay
6th Jul 2024 7:53pm
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