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Short Story - First Meeting

Under the dim lights of a quaint bar that seemed to have frozen in time, Margarita found herself sipping on a drink that mirrored her name. The ambiance was quiet, save for the soft hum of a jazz tune playing in the background. At 38, she was a portrait of resilience, her dark eyes reflecting a life of dedication to her family and the new future she was determined to build in the United States.

Across from her sat William, a man whose salt-and-pepper hair spoke of wisdom and years she had yet to know. He had a gentle demeanor, the kind that put her at ease despite the maze of uncertainty that lay ahead of her. As a widower, William knew the contours of love and loss, yet his eyes held the spark of adventure you’d expect in a younger man.

"So, Margarita," William began, his voice as smooth as the whiskey in his glass, "how are you finding the citizenship process?"

Margarita sighed, a small smile playing on her lips. "It's like learning a new dance, William. Complicated steps, a lot of patience, and sometimes you step on toes without meaning to."

William chuckled. "I can only imagine. But from what I see, you're quite the dancer."

Their conversation flowed as easily as the drinks they nursed, and somewhere between discussing the complexities of immigration law and their shared love for old movies, William leaned in with a twinkle in his eye.

"Hey, since you're teaching me so much about your journey, how about you teach me something fun? Like some Spanish pickup lines, maybe?"

Margarita laughed, the sound mingling with the music. "You want to learn pickup lines? Are you planning on sweeping someone off her feet?"

"Who knows?" William shrugged playfully. "Maybe I just want to be prepared."

"Okay," Margarita agreed, still smiling. "Let's start with something simple. Repeat after me: '¿Vienes aquí a menudo?'"

William furrowed his brow in concentration. "¿Vienes... aquí... a menudo?"

"Not bad for a gringo," she teased. "It means 'Do you come here often?'"

"Classic," William grinned. "Alright, hit me with another one."

"Okay, how about this one: 'Si la belleza fuera delito, yo te hubiera dado cadena perpetua.'"

William's attempt was endearing, if not entirely accurate. "Si la belle... belleza... fuera delito, yo te hubiera dado cadena per... perpetua."

She corrected his pronunciation gently and then translated, "If beauty were a crime, I would have given you a life sentence."

William laughed. "That's pretty good. I might actually use that one!"

The evening wore on, and the two found themselves wrapped in the comfort of shared stories and newfound friendship. Then, taking a sip of his drink, William ventured with a playful glint in his eye, "Margarita, ¿quieres venir a ver mi casa?"

Margarita's eyes sparkled with amusement, recognizing her own words echoed back to her. She nodded, "Sí, me gustaría eso."

The night air was crisp as they stepped out of the bar and walked to William's car. The drive was short, and soon they were standing in front of a charming house that carried the warmth of a home that had once been full of life.

William opened the door, allowing Margarita to enter first. "Welcome to my humble abode," he said.

As she walked through the rooms, each corner held a story that William eagerly shared. The laughter of his children seemed to echo in the hallways, and the love he had for his late wife was evident in the way he spoke of their past.

Margarita listened, her heart touched by the depth of his experiences. Here was a man who understood love and loss, and the value of new beginnings. And as they ended the tour in the quiet of his living room, she realized that their chance meeting might just be the first step in a dance neither of them had expected to learn.
Written by Nizana (Lauryn)
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Author's Note
Just a short story based on something that happened to a hispanic friend of mine here in Dallas. I might continue it or use it in the book I'm working on. The photo is edited from one of Margarita, my beautiful friend.
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