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Creole Negra
Creole woman.
She’s like sugar and spice,
Made up of everything naughty
and red beans and rice.
If you think about pursuing her,
I hope that you can dance.
Because if you can’t zydeco baby,
you haven’t got a chance.
She’s a beauty of mixed culture,
she speaks a little spanish,
a little french too.
But tread carefully,
cos she might know voodoo.
She knows a lot of tricks in bed,
she sucks more than just crawfish heads.
She can burn in the kitchen!
That means she can cook,
she’s one of a kind,
she’s more than just her good looks.
She cooks and she cleans.
She’s a good mother to them babies,
but know her mama didn’t raise no fool!
Yeah, Louisiana made her,
but her daddy showed her how to use that tool!
That’s right, she ain’t gonna play no victim.
She will fight you tooth and nail,
that creole negra
she is everything,
she’s heaven and hell.
- Poetic Gawdess.
She’s like sugar and spice,
Made up of everything naughty
and red beans and rice.
If you think about pursuing her,
I hope that you can dance.
Because if you can’t zydeco baby,
you haven’t got a chance.
She’s a beauty of mixed culture,
she speaks a little spanish,
a little french too.
But tread carefully,
cos she might know voodoo.
She knows a lot of tricks in bed,
she sucks more than just crawfish heads.
She can burn in the kitchen!
That means she can cook,
she’s one of a kind,
she’s more than just her good looks.
She cooks and she cleans.
She’s a good mother to them babies,
but know her mama didn’t raise no fool!
Yeah, Louisiana made her,
but her daddy showed her how to use that tool!
That’s right, she ain’t gonna play no victim.
She will fight you tooth and nail,
that creole negra
she is everything,
she’s heaven and hell.
- Poetic Gawdess.
Published 30th Jun 2024
Author's Note
Louisiana homegrown. This is sort a self poem, as I am a proud Louisianan. Brought up by mixed parents and the creole culture. Just for shits and giggles but so much truth. Love always,
~P.G💋
~P.G💋
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30th Jun 2024 9:10pm
10th Jul 2024 5:39pm
Creole woman.
She’s like sugar and spice,
Made up of everything naughty
and red beans and rice.
I had an expectation of where it was going, & you went in another direction. And I like that.
She’s like sugar and spice,
Made up of everything naughty
and red beans and rice.
I had an expectation of where it was going, & you went in another direction. And I like that.
10th Jul 2024 8:24pm
11th Jul 2024 4:20am
This rocked my Louisiana world tonight! I l am from Baton Rouge, a former New Orleanian. And this accents everything I love about the creole culture and its women. This is a spicy melange that flavors every taste bud in my tongue. And I must say you put the fire in my tabasco tonight. Voodoo indeed. I am bewitched by the melody of this poem.
John
John
11th Jul 2024 4:52am
Hello again, John! I’m so glad to know that a fellow Louisiana native approves. 😊 I’m so glad that you enjoyed my poem and that I have made it on your reading list again. You are very much appreciated!
xoxo,
~P.G💋
xoxo,
~P.G💋
