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Revelation
The night was a twinkling glitter shower.
The moon's pale lemon light,
caressed the intoxicating sleepy flowers.
A whisper from the universe,
assured me I was not alone.
My silent primordial dreams,
were already known.
Galaxies joyously remember me.
They recognize my energy.
It glistens, the celestial shine of night.
Makes what lays beyond,
seem revelation bright.
The moon's pale lemon light,
caressed the intoxicating sleepy flowers.
A whisper from the universe,
assured me I was not alone.
My silent primordial dreams,
were already known.
Galaxies joyously remember me.
They recognize my energy.
It glistens, the celestial shine of night.
Makes what lays beyond,
seem revelation bright.
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Re. Revelation
28th Jun 2024 1:58pm
A beautiful, spacey theme that creates a tranquil, soothing atmosphere. Well written & very well received. Love that image.
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28th Jun 2024 2:10pm
It brought a little tranquility to my morning. Thank you for such nice comments!
I really dig the image too.
I really dig the image too.
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That is so nice of you to say as I've been struggling with creativity
at times. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!
Welcome to the site. This has been the perfect create outlet and escape for me.
A great group of writers to be a part of. Have an enjoyable experience.
at times. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!
Welcome to the site. This has been the perfect create outlet and escape for me.
A great group of writers to be a part of. Have an enjoyable experience.
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Re. Revelation
Anonymous
28th Jun 2024 5:42pm
Those universal whispers are everything, aren't they? Transporting, that's what this poem was
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28th Jun 2024 6:46pm
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29th Jun 2024 00:30am
Omg, beautiful! Did you see the moon last week, it was life changing.
As always you are a breath of fresh air.
As always you are a breath of fresh air.
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29th Jun 2024 00:36am
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29th Jun 2024 12:36pm
You are so good at describing nature, that's a rare gift.
The wording in this one is amazing, I love that it has Galaxies 💕
The wording in this one is amazing, I love that it has Galaxies 💕
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Re. Revelation
29th Jun 2024 12:53pm
I have a very keen eye for nature. Give me nature, the description flows out of me
Thank you for lovely comments and I'm happy you enjoyed.
Thank you for lovely comments and I'm happy you enjoyed.
Re. Revelation
5th Jul 2024 6:32am
Very on-point metaphorical language used here. It's as though you know there's a hint of purpose in somewhere or something. The beauty of the words you use to depict this is great. You keep looking to the stars, and that has reassured your confidence. Anyway, good job overall.
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5th Jul 2024 10:43am
Thank you so much for reading all these poems
That was such a nice commentary.
I guess I am always searching for a hint of purpose
Thx for checking out. 🤗
That was such a nice commentary.
I guess I am always searching for a hint of purpose
Thx for checking out. 🤗