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Whose your god now

My god is black steel
Loaded
When I place it in your mouth you will agree
Vision_of_insanity
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Re. Whose your god now
28th Jun 2024 10:49am
Stark... bold
LilDragonFly
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Re: Re. Whose your god now
28th Jun 2024 11:05am
Thank you. Appreciate the comments
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Whose your god now
(Debbie)
28th Jun 2024 11:29am
I liked this. People do play God with others lives
It had a sleek brevity to it.
deliabear
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Re: Re. Whose your god now
28th Jun 2024 11:35am
Thank you. Come in, say what I needed to say and get out!
Thanks always Debbie.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Whose your god now
28th Jun 2024 1:11pm
Amazing metaphors that could have numerous applications from a gun, cock, whip, etc. Hugs and love, Oral
TheOralizer
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Re: Re. Whose your god now
28th Jun 2024 1:18pm
Oh so true. Great observation my friend. Thanks!!
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Whose your god now
30th Jun 2024 9:44am
Mmmm. Russian Roulette. I'll bite ;)
AfterSexDilemma
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Re: Re. Whose your god now
30th Jun 2024 10:50am
You'll take that chance?
Vision_of_insanity

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