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Whose your god now

My god is black steel
Loaded
When I place it in your mouth you will agree

Written by Vision_of_insanity

Published 28th Jun 2024

#God #GunControl #violence

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Re. Whose your god now

28th Jun 2024 10:49am

Stark... bold

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28th Jun 2024 11:05am

Thank you. Appreciate the comments

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Re. Whose your god now

28th Jun 2024 11:29am

I liked this. People do play God with others lives
It had a sleek brevity to it.

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28th Jun 2024 11:35am

Thank you. Come in, say what I needed to say and get out!
Thanks always Debbie.

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Re. Whose your god now

28th Jun 2024 1:11pm

Amazing metaphors that could have numerous applications from a gun, cock, whip, etc. Hugs and love, Oral

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28th Jun 2024 1:18pm

Oh so true. Great observation my friend. Thanks!!

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Re. Whose your god now

Anonymous

30th Jun 2024 9:44am

Mmmm. Russian Roulette. I'll bite ;)

30th Jun 2024 10:50am

You'll take that chance?

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