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still salty
I thought for the longest time
that I saw something in you
...I was wrong
you were as empty
as the Dead Sea
Published 24th Jun 2024
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24th Jun 2024 2:47am
Ahahahhahahhahhaaaaa! Yes!
But hey, at least everyone floats!
Masterful play on words and concepts.
But hey, at least everyone floats!
Masterful play on words and concepts.
24th Jun 2024 4:27am
Floats like a dead stone.
Thank you, Betty. Very much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Betty. Very much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
24th Jun 2024 5:56pm
Oh yeah, people wear masks quite well until they forget to tie the back of them. . .
Well done. Solidly succinct.
Well done. Solidly succinct.
24th Jun 2024 8:51pm
Forget to tie the back of them. Great observation.
Thank you, Ahavati.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Ahavati.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
28th Aug 2024 11:17pm
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