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Precipice
our words collide in
clouds we cannot see;
they’re eager to become one
again, and then again;
restless, our limbs are yet
longing for what has never been,
save a brief, passionate moment
one glorious autumn long ago;
our souls found purchase atop
the darkness we found so
readily in each other;
the toxic buildup tore us down,
and flowers grew in our graves;
these are not those days ~
not anymore, my love;
now we stand on the precipice,
one leg in the time that’s passed,
the other in an uncertain future
Published 19th Jun 2024
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20th Jun 2024 2:46am
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20th Jun 2024 11:59am
Wow, very stunning and beautiful poem. A perfect match to your image as well.
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25th Jun 2024 6:01am
Dear L,
I love the story in this write. Made me remember the love story I was hoping might happen a long time ago. It didn’t. But this feels like there’s a future based on what was right and what has been acknowledged of “not so good, so let’s not repeat that part”. This is a real beauty of a write that makes me want to know how this plays out.
H🌷
I love the story in this write. Made me remember the love story I was hoping might happen a long time ago. It didn’t. But this feels like there’s a future based on what was right and what has been acknowledged of “not so good, so let’s not repeat that part”. This is a real beauty of a write that makes me want to know how this plays out.
H🌷
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27th Aug 2024 10:55pm
Love the nostalgic sentiment that cradles that special relationship.
Great work Luna.
Great work Luna.
4th Sep 2024 11:43am
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