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Decisions
What I have done now
Choice without reservation
I regret nothing
Choice without reservation
I regret nothing
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 18th Jun 2024
| Edited 19th Jun 2024
Author's Note
For the haiku competition
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Re. Descions
18th Jun 2024 6:45pm
That's the way to do it! Think before you do, then they'll be no regrets. Nicely written Fia!
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18th Jun 2024 7:50pm
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Dec 2024 5:45pm
18th Jun 2024 6:56pm
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18th Jun 2024 7:50pm
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18th Jun 2024 7:30pm
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18th Jun 2024 8:01pm
Re. Descions
18th Jun 2024 7:40pm
We'll never regret our own decisions, its done, and no way back !
That's the truth and self resolutions..
That's the truth and self resolutions..
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18th Jun 2024 8:01pm
Re. Decisions
18th Jun 2024 10:09pm
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18th Jun 2024 10:19pm
Re. Decisions
19th Jun 2024 3:22am
Dear F,
This write made me think how courageous to make choices and not look back. That’s a gift so few receive. I enjoyed this poem and wish you all the best in the comp. H🌷
This write made me think how courageous to make choices and not look back. That’s a gift so few receive. I enjoyed this poem and wish you all the best in the comp. H🌷
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Re: Re. Decisions
19th Jun 2024 3:58am
Re. Decisions
Anonymous
19th Jun 2024 10:04am
Hi there
I note this is in the haiku comp. I just wanted to say that you’ve got an 8 syllable count on the middle line there and I think you’re looking for 7 for a 5-7-5 haiku. Just wanted to let you know in the spirit of good will amongst poets.
That aside, the message here is beautiful. It’s unapologetic and I think that’s something that I can absolutely get behind. There aren’t enough people that stand up and are entirely themselves, so kudos to you for that.
Thank you for sharing this. Have a good one.
-M
I note this is in the haiku comp. I just wanted to say that you’ve got an 8 syllable count on the middle line there and I think you’re looking for 7 for a 5-7-5 haiku. Just wanted to let you know in the spirit of good will amongst poets.
That aside, the message here is beautiful. It’s unapologetic and I think that’s something that I can absolutely get behind. There aren’t enough people that stand up and are entirely themselves, so kudos to you for that.
Thank you for sharing this. Have a good one.
-M
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Re: Re. Decisions
19th Jun 2024 12:15pm
Thank you for pointing it out. I think I have put the right word to fix the error.
Thank you for commenting.;)
Thank you for commenting.;)
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2024 3:45pm
30th Jun 2024 00:31am
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30th Jun 2024 00:32am