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some random shit
one cloudy day to another
onto the next
repeat repeat
same routine
clouded misted
here we go again
cry sleep robotic moves
again repeat same fucking thing
over and over are you bored yet?
wake pop it wash it down
try and move ...here we go again
ah fuck what is the point just give in
sleep...repeat
onto the next
repeat repeat
same routine
clouded misted
here we go again
cry sleep robotic moves
again repeat same fucking thing
over and over are you bored yet?
wake pop it wash it down
try and move ...here we go again
ah fuck what is the point just give in
sleep...repeat
Published 18th Jun 2024
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20th Jun 2024 00:26am
22nd Jun 2024 1:13pm
In a short poem, you captured one's perception of the cycle of futility and what's the point of going through it again! Very well done in an artistic display.
Here's to hoping you aren't stuck within the cycle. Your writing, and ability to communicate emotions are impressive skills.
Welcome to DUP. You have lot to offer this medium.
Here's to hoping you aren't stuck within the cycle. Your writing, and ability to communicate emotions are impressive skills.
Welcome to DUP. You have lot to offer this medium.
22nd Jun 2024 5:20pm
You’ve beautifully depicted the monotony of certain aspects of life and the frustrations of being trapped in an unending cycle. Well done!
