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That Night
It was how the streetlight
dimly lit the inside of the car
on the dark, deserted road.
The way she put her foot up
on the dashboard and spread
her shapely legs.
The way she tasted, smelled—
the wetness, the moaning,
her toe ring, and the sweet
smell of her vagina.
The warmth and the grip
of her insides.
The windows fogged up
from our heavy breathing.
The feel of her breasts
as I slowly slid in and out.
And the way our eyes locked.
The way we came.
It never came again.
But what a night.
dimly lit the inside of the car
on the dark, deserted road.
The way she put her foot up
on the dashboard and spread
her shapely legs.
The way she tasted, smelled—
the wetness, the moaning,
her toe ring, and the sweet
smell of her vagina.
The warmth and the grip
of her insides.
The windows fogged up
from our heavy breathing.
The feel of her breasts
as I slowly slid in and out.
And the way our eyes locked.
The way we came.
It never came again.
But what a night.
Author's Note
Quickly written. Inspired by a comment I made earlier. I would have put a pic but they were minimal and all gifs.
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Re. That Night
18th Jun 2024 00:29am
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18th Jun 2024 1:43am
Re. That Night
18th Jun 2024 00:38am
Amazing how the memory captures moments, isn't it? Or the imagination
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18th Jun 2024 1:45am
I agree 100%. When I'm in the supermarket, once in a blue moon a woman will walk by with the same perfume and my mind is in the front seat again. Thanks for the comment, Willow. :)
Re. That Night
18th Jun 2024 2:31am
Nothing 'minimal' about this encounter, Tim. I felt the excitement through every word. 😋
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18th Jun 2024 2:33am
Re. That Night
18th Jun 2024 2:46am
Holy shit! Tim?! You go ON with your bad self! That was hot and a helluva great memory.
Loved it. Car sex. There’s just something about it.
Loved it. Car sex. There’s just something about it.
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18th Jun 2024 3:46am
There really is. Before the stick shifts and cup holders it was empty with enough room to spread out a tad. Glad you liked it. Thanks, Betty. :)
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18th Jun 2024 3:01am
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Re. That Night
18th Jun 2024 2:12pm
Sometimes one night / one person can make a bigger impact than another in years being together. This seems to be one of those rare encounters. A memory to be cherished. Awesome piece, Tim.
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18th Jun 2024 2:54pm