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Till time is over
Tell me you want me
Tell me you need me
Till time is over
I’ll tell you I want you
I’ll tell you I need you
Till time is over
I want to be wrapped up in your arms
As I am lying in your bed
Succumb to your charms
Till time is over
Tell me you need me
Till time is over
I’ll tell you I want you
I’ll tell you I need you
Till time is over
I want to be wrapped up in your arms
As I am lying in your bed
Succumb to your charms
Till time is over
Author's Note
So I am stuck in my musing with this one. I've been writing this romance poem for a while.
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Anonymous
17th Jun 2024 5:45pm
Had there been no themes I would have mentioned how romantic this is.
I like it. :)
I like it. :)
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Anonymous
17th Jun 2024 5:52pm
It seems fine to me. Maybe it could be tweaked, but....I like it. :)
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Re. Till time is over
17th Jun 2024 5:59pm
Your Romantic side is so tenderly warm, as i read your words, i get such a calming sensation,
Your fantasy might be more alluring and sweet than your real writings...i guess !!!
stay safe and happy my friend..
Your fantasy might be more alluring and sweet than your real writings...i guess !!!
stay safe and happy my friend..
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17th Jun 2024 8:09pm
The "time" could be interpreted more than one way - life time, the time world has before it ends, the time the couple are destined to be together or the time they have for their rendezvous.
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Re: Re. Till time is over
17th Jun 2024 8:31pm
Nice to see my poem in someone else's eyes. Thank you for your interpretation. Solomon
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