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Bloom
Rise above
negative thoughts.
Insulate yourself
like feathers
from their cold.
Keep a song in your heart.
There will always be
stars above,
always a limb of hope.
Build your nest
on a renewed mind.
Start small
with the twigs of
possibilities.
Trees grow
from minuscule seeds;
a notion from the
earth's soil —
so may the future be for you.
Plant seeds,
water them daily,
envision a great future,
flying as high as you can.
negative thoughts.
Insulate yourself
like feathers
from their cold.
Keep a song in your heart.
There will always be
stars above,
always a limb of hope.
Build your nest
on a renewed mind.
Start small
with the twigs of
possibilities.
Trees grow
from minuscule seeds;
a notion from the
earth's soil —
so may the future be for you.
Plant seeds,
water them daily,
envision a great future,
flying as high as you can.
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Re. Bloom
17th Jun 2024 3:48am
Re. Bloom
17th Jun 2024 4:07am
Dear T,
I enjoyed the presentation of this evolution. Respectfully and wonderfully written. H🌷
I enjoyed the presentation of this evolution. Respectfully and wonderfully written. H🌷
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Re: Re. Bloom
17th Jun 2024 4:09am
Re. Bloom
17th Jun 2024 4:24am
The rain on the leaves looks like sweat on skin.
I found the ending as foreshadowing. Not quite ominous, but not sweet like the original love. This goes from innocent to something new. If it’s not innocent , there is darkness, seductive things alluded in the omissions
Great piece Tim. The interpretations are twisty and I like it.
I found the ending as foreshadowing. Not quite ominous, but not sweet like the original love. This goes from innocent to something new. If it’s not innocent , there is darkness, seductive things alluded in the omissions
Great piece Tim. The interpretations are twisty and I like it.
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Re: Re. Bloom
Thank you, Betty.
I thought about the bible belt and how they considered sex out of wedlock a sin. The rain on the leaf looking like sweat was intentional so thanks for picking up on that.
I thought about the bible belt and how they considered sex out of wedlock a sin. The rain on the leaf looking like sweat was intentional so thanks for picking up on that.
Re. Bloom
17th Jun 2024 12:39pm
There's a lot of layers going on in this one. An evolution. I love the vibrancy of the leaves & the drops on them. Both hope & maturity in their image.
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Re: Re. Bloom
17th Jun 2024 3:28pm
Thanks Willow. Metaphors and symbolism are more challenging for me than being graphic. :)
Re. Bloom
17th Jun 2024 6:10pm
Falls innocence, rise experience,
Each time has its own spirit, we are what we are despite time and place, we keep our first personality even
at an advanced aged !!!
thanks for sharing..
Each time has its own spirit, we are what we are despite time and place, we keep our first personality even
at an advanced aged !!!
thanks for sharing..
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Re: Re. Bloom
17th Jun 2024 6:13pm