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A Gust Of Wind
Love is the wind
We sail the seas in
A master plan
Makes our world expand
The helping hand
To conquer lands
Never knowing if you can
Hop out the sea and drop your fins
To strengthen your legs and stand.
To adapt and start a new trend
To develop a set of wings and begin
To take to the wind
Soaring through true love again
We sail the seas in
A master plan
Makes our world expand
The helping hand
To conquer lands
Never knowing if you can
Hop out the sea and drop your fins
To strengthen your legs and stand.
To adapt and start a new trend
To develop a set of wings and begin
To take to the wind
Soaring through true love again
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Re. A Gust Of Wind
16th Jun 2024 10:08am
If we sail against the wind, we must know, a priori that this is worth the trouble taken,
if we just confront the wind to show something else, then we might be wrong and fall at length..
Decisions must backed up by a mind not only heart...
Stays safe and happy..
if we just confront the wind to show something else, then we might be wrong and fall at length..
Decisions must backed up by a mind not only heart...
Stays safe and happy..
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Re: Re. A Gust Of Wind
16th Jun 2024 10:19am
Unfortunately mind and heart are at the mercy of autonomic processes. Take a steroid, and you'll become a completely different person. There is no real control. Just what we perceive as control.
Re: Re. A Gust Of Wind
16th Jun 2024 10:42am
What if we take nothing, at all, and leave the body heal itself?
self healing, self curing process takes a while but , at the end we find true relief,
When medication comes from the outside, you wont expect a real
healing and self restoration, the body will always need an extrernal interference to heal...its what we all call '' Addiction ''.
you wont be controlling any biological process in the long run..
everything has been tested,"" in real life "" endured and given
natural solutions..
self healing, self curing process takes a while but , at the end we find true relief,
When medication comes from the outside, you wont expect a real
healing and self restoration, the body will always need an extrernal interference to heal...its what we all call '' Addiction ''.
you wont be controlling any biological process in the long run..
everything has been tested,"" in real life "" endured and given
natural solutions..
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Re: Re. A Gust Of Wind
16th Jun 2024 10:45am
Re: Re. A Gust Of Wind
16th Jun 2024 10:48am
The body can fight addiction in the span of 6 months, and then its clean, and beyond this time, it can return back to its original health state......but with age, its hard and it takes longer to recover...
Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. A Gust Of Wind
16th Jun 2024 10:51am
Yes I personally went through something similar to this recently. So 6 months is definitely the minimum. Thanks for the read and thoughts!
Re. A Gust Of Wind
16th Jun 2024 10:55am
You said in your other poem you were going to write the opposite on love and you did. Great!!! The description & detail you present here moves me and makes me think, just do it! Make it happen! A wonderful piece of poetry!
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Re: Re. A Gust Of Wind
16th Jun 2024 11:03am
If you love your gf, why not give it your all instead of wishing you did after it's over? Even if it does end, it's that effort she will remember and possibly come back to. :)
Re: Re. A Gust Of Wind
16th Jun 2024 11:05am
Re: Re. A Gust Of Wind
16th Jun 2024 11:41am
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/166402-gone/
Always leave a lasting impression to keep her happy
Always leave a lasting impression to keep her happy
Re. A Gust Of Wind
16th Jun 2024 10:19pm
Re: Re. A Gust Of Wind
17th Jun 2024 2:10am
I just wanted to show the contrast from the last poem. Thanks for the read!