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The real you are different
Alive in people's lives
Colors of chaos,
Chaotic Orbit,
Through the chaotic streets
When you are invited to a party of their own villainous
The real you are
Alive in the sound of their laughter
Doubt?
Is that really the case?
Under the Butcher's Blade
In the sound of their breath with their eyes closed,
Are you alive?
Become their breath and tell their story
Let's come out into the world
Your untrue life
In their FROZEN tears
It is flowing.
Alive in people's lives
Colors of chaos,
Chaotic Orbit,
Through the chaotic streets
When you are invited to a party of their own villainous
The real you are
Alive in the sound of their laughter
Doubt?
Is that really the case?
Under the Butcher's Blade
In the sound of their breath with their eyes closed,
Are you alive?
Become their breath and tell their story
Let's come out into the world
Your untrue life
In their FROZEN tears
It is flowing.
Published 15th Jun 2024
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