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Sticky Note Reminder
Let the sunlight beam
as she folds into you
sinking in
through your skin
penetrate
to the depths
of a cold and lonely heart
Springed in
on a summer wave
as the wind
brushes through
The grass
together as one
dancing in strands
look up
then through
to see your distant future
and savor the spice of past
The present
is a gift that is life
to find little joys
such as the bird
singing an old tune
your friend of fond memories
The coffee
tea
water
to sip on cold-hard life
still a blessing
of contemplation-preparation
Good morning
today will be a great day
your hard work is much appreciated
for yourself and others, too
live on
there is strength within you
let the light shine on
more brighter
everyday
(I'll have me a chocolate with my drink~!)
as she folds into you
sinking in
through your skin
penetrate
to the depths
of a cold and lonely heart
Springed in
on a summer wave
as the wind
brushes through
The grass
together as one
dancing in strands
look up
then through
to see your distant future
and savor the spice of past
The present
is a gift that is life
to find little joys
such as the bird
singing an old tune
your friend of fond memories
The coffee
tea
water
to sip on cold-hard life
still a blessing
of contemplation-preparation
Good morning
today will be a great day
your hard work is much appreciated
for yourself and others, too
live on
there is strength within you
let the light shine on
more brighter
everyday
(I'll have me a chocolate with my drink~!)
Published 14th Jun 2024
| Edited 18th Jun 2024
Author's Note
I was inspired by Miss Indie's healing poetry, and Dark's light poem.
I thought I'd revist trying to see peace each day again in a topic...!
I thought I'd revist trying to see peace each day again in a topic...!
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14th Jun 2024 10:26am
14th Jun 2024 4:25pm
Thank you so much.
I'm glad I was able to spread this optimism with my words.
I was hoping to bring a little warmth to the readers.
Been seeing so much sad poems so I thought I'd give it a try...!
♡
I'm glad I was able to spread this optimism with my words.
I was hoping to bring a little warmth to the readers.
Been seeing so much sad poems so I thought I'd give it a try...!
♡
14th Jun 2024 10:39am
Dear C,
Delightful piece. Your kind encouragement in this write have really put positivity in the universe for me. I will now make that cup of tea. Lovely poem. H🌷
Delightful piece. Your kind encouragement in this write have really put positivity in the universe for me. I will now make that cup of tea. Lovely poem. H🌷
14th Jun 2024 4:28pm
Thank you, H!
I'm glad you enjoyed this piece,
and was able to spread positivity to you.
I appreciate your kind words and
I hope you enjoyed your morning!
♡
I'm glad you enjoyed this piece,
and was able to spread positivity to you.
I appreciate your kind words and
I hope you enjoyed your morning!
♡
14th Jun 2024 11:23am
Your words are as sweet as the chocolate you eat.
Great poem to start off my morning.
The present, being present is a gift.
Great poem to start off my morning.
The present, being present is a gift.
14th Jun 2024 4:32pm
Thank you so much
for your delightful words, Debbie!
I was hoping to reach you with this poem...
I read your sad poem,
and thought about how you spend your morning with coffee.
I hope for your morning to be filled with positive light today.
♡
for your delightful words, Debbie!
I was hoping to reach you with this poem...
I read your sad poem,
and thought about how you spend your morning with coffee.
I hope for your morning to be filled with positive light today.
♡
14th Jun 2024 4:46pm
14th Jun 2024 11:25am
14th Jun 2024 4:33pm
16th Jun 2024 6:43am
Love the gentle sway of emotions and imagery here. You took me into the heart of serenity that this world sorely needs. Loved each and every thought you presented here and the way you wrote them. This is what poetry is all about. Medicine for the blues of life.
John
John
18th Jun 2024 10:04am
Thank you so much for taking your time to understand and cipher my poems, John!
I deeply appreciate your comment, and time into writing such sweet and kind words.
Hope you have a wonderful day!
♡
I deeply appreciate your comment, and time into writing such sweet and kind words.
Hope you have a wonderful day!
♡
18th Jun 2024 10:11am
18th Jun 2024 10:18am
