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Life is Like . . .
Waiting...
for you to take control...
The anticipation-
for your next move
Splayed wide open...
for you to take advantage
Ass-fucked...
HARD
(from time to time)
A give and take-
serviced in Ying and Yang
(69)
Needs a good 'ol
...breaking in
Was but a virgin...
So bleed your blood, as you will
But now make it your bitch!
Published 13th Jun 2024
Author's Note
Another night-time thought.
Wanted to have a little fun with a sudden inspiration!
Please be kind...
Wanted to have a little fun with a sudden inspiration!
Please be kind...
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13th Jun 2024 8:49am
I will be kind, I think you’ll find
My comment will be good
Your poem complete, has got my meat
Erect and hard as wood
My night time thought of your night time thought…
😊
My comment will be good
Your poem complete, has got my meat
Erect and hard as wood
My night time thought of your night time thought…
😊
13th Jun 2024 10:44am
14th Jun 2024 4:36pm
Thank you Debbie for your amazing support.
This was just a random thought I had...
I came across erotic poems
And then saw poems of people struggling
thought to mix it up...!
♡
This was just a random thought I had...
I came across erotic poems
And then saw poems of people struggling
thought to mix it up...!
♡
13th Jun 2024 10:53am
14th Jun 2024 4:37pm
Thank you, LJ
It was pretty fun to write!
I'm glad you found enjoyment in it!
♡
It was pretty fun to write!
I'm glad you found enjoyment in it!
♡
13th Jun 2024 10:58pm
14th Jun 2024 4:39pm
Thank you Sam.
Love it or hate it,
it is the only one given
so we must do whatever we can I guess!!
♡
Love it or hate it,
it is the only one given
so we must do whatever we can I guess!!
♡
This sizzled with the power of sensual abandon. Loved the form the lines are presented in which enhances the overall effect. And the way you used words after in parentheses and italics gave your poem a feel of unbridled and raw poetics that made for a heady read. You shine in multiple genres.
John
John
20th Jun 2024 12:32pm
Very nice. "Another night-time thought." I get random thoughts out of no where. Enjoyed the piece Fia xoxo
