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Sweet release
That ocean is going to rise so high one day
and ill greet it head first
all the echoes of the laughter
that lake of saltiness
gone...and fuck me...sweet silence
and ill greet it head first
all the echoes of the laughter
that lake of saltiness
gone...and fuck me...sweet silence
Published 11th Jun 2024
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11th Jun 2024 10:38pm
We're here to express. So express away. That's one of the reasons we all come here.
You have value no matter on this site or off.
Keep writing.
You have value no matter on this site or off.
Keep writing.
13th Jun 2024 12:44pm
Timagination2 I'm not sure what he's referring to. He's right though the difference is what makes your writing your own. We all see things different you view is no less important continue writing
16th Jun 2024 1:22am
