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Let's go riding

Do you remember your first time?
An out of this world experience
Terror, Joy and fantasy all wrapped into one...Fascinating!

These beasts tower over amusement parks
the curves and loops of these Steel & Wooden coasters
brilliantly daring, dominating your curiosity

Anticipation as the train begins to lift
slowly creeping up the track
people, buildings & trees are shrinking
almost at the top
your heart is pumping really fast.
you can view the entire park
HERE WE GO....DOWN!!!

The air whistles past your face
your hands grip tightly to the handlebars
you begin to scream
your stomach has jumped out of your mouth
screaming continues..
shaking, thumping  
hair blowing in the wind
eyes are tearing from the excitement & force
hands up in the air

Train is slowing down
coming back to the station
many are applauding
the experience was orgasmic
you exit the car with tingling hands,
a trembling body,
a glistening in your eyes
you want more,
your hooked
you wanted that experience to last forever
Written by Vision_of_insanity
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