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Flower Bomb
Lying in the
middle of a field
being baptized by flowers
With petals like wings
the earth and
its mysterious power
of love and magnets
that curve and arc
so many colors
like flavored sugar
mingled in the breeze
Ignoring their roots
defying gravity
following the pull
of me
to you
each sweet harlequin petal
paving a path to follow
making a bee line
towards your lips
landing on your tongue
like the eucharist
where you swallow
me whole
anointing my soul
to yours in unity
with ceremonial lightning,
seeds, and rain
making a wish
a Flower Bomb
ending you and I
springing us
middle of a field
being baptized by flowers
With petals like wings
the earth and
its mysterious power
of love and magnets
that curve and arc
so many colors
like flavored sugar
mingled in the breeze
Ignoring their roots
defying gravity
following the pull
of me
to you
each sweet harlequin petal
paving a path to follow
making a bee line
towards your lips
landing on your tongue
like the eucharist
where you swallow
me whole
anointing my soul
to yours in unity
with ceremonial lightning,
seeds, and rain
making a wish
a Flower Bomb
ending you and I
springing us
Author's Note
I stared writing this last night.
Jotting things down here and there.
This is what I came up with.
Hope you enjoy:)
Jotting things down here and there.
This is what I came up with.
Hope you enjoy:)
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Re. Flower Bomb
9th Jun 2024 3:33am
Brilliant write. Really love your word play. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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9th Jun 2024 3:42am
Re. Flower Bomb
9th Jun 2024 4:12am
Baby, you looking at my plants?
I think I want some bamboo, by the back fence. Yeah?
And hmm, a bit of playful eroticism in this write, I detect? I like!
(Why is my mouth watering?)
Okay, serious!
-A vibrant, visual feast you've prepared here. The wordplay is on point! It has a back to nature vibe, organic in desire. And I'm pleasantly shocked that you've written two so recently! Yay for woosaw time, huh.
And hey, well, you know!
I think I want some bamboo, by the back fence. Yeah?
And hmm, a bit of playful eroticism in this write, I detect? I like!
(Why is my mouth watering?)
Okay, serious!
-A vibrant, visual feast you've prepared here. The wordplay is on point! It has a back to nature vibe, organic in desire. And I'm pleasantly shocked that you've written two so recently! Yay for woosaw time, huh.
And hey, well, you know!
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Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 1:48am
Bamboo spreads!!
Just think about it.
Charlie wouldn't be able to see ya.
As you know I loved my henna tat!
Not going to be my last one - I just gotta be patient and sit still
which is a challenge. hahah
It was a great memory in time - I don't like that it faded so
fast:((
I'm in a writing mood lately as you well know mister.
Stay tuned lover:)
thanks for the RL baby!
Just think about it.
Charlie wouldn't be able to see ya.
As you know I loved my henna tat!
Not going to be my last one - I just gotta be patient and sit still
which is a challenge. hahah
It was a great memory in time - I don't like that it faded so
fast:((
I'm in a writing mood lately as you well know mister.
Stay tuned lover:)
thanks for the RL baby!
Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 1:50am
I can sharpie you up for free!
Well not exactly free... that sharpie will travel all over you. Like I do.
Well not exactly free... that sharpie will travel all over you. Like I do.
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Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 2:28am
No sharpie - paint!
I do believe you know your way around a paintbrush.
yeah?
LOL
I do believe you know your way around a paintbrush.
yeah?
LOL
Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 2:35am
Deal! I can be really intricate, as you've seen. Except when you giggle really loud and shock the hell out of me and then God forbid its red paint and you look like a slasher victim and I get arrested and the neighbors say it's no surprise cause i look shady sometimes if I don't brush my hair and etc and the cops take me away and one good looking hunky cop wants to comfort you because ol meanie Mark was a meanie and you swear it's just paint and the cop says that's what they always say and you cry cause I'm gone and you wanted to go-to Macy's but didn't want to drive...
God, I love it when you're around! Its fun!
God, I love it when you're around! Its fun!
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Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 2:52am
hey, that one time you scared/shocked the hell out of me when you tickle bit me on my side. Be glad you didn't get a sharp elbow to the eye!! Then when we'd go to Macy's you'd look like the battered husband who has a girlfriend from the Mexican cartel who beats you up. Then when you'd buy me jewelry the cashier would try to send you a note on the back of the receipt asking if you need help.
I am fun right?!! hahahaha
You're crazy - and bring the paint punk!
I am fun right?!! hahahaha
You're crazy - and bring the paint punk!
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12th Jun 2024 2:55am
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12th Jun 2024 3:00am
Dude - I will Karate Kid Crane Kick you.
just like Daniel-san!!
hahaha
Check it out!
just try me!!
https://i.makeagif.com/media/7-01-2015/Bh8yog.gif
just like Daniel-san!!
hahaha
Check it out!
just try me!!
https://i.makeagif.com/media/7-01-2015/Bh8yog.gif
Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 3:02am
Do you really want to hurt meeeee
Do you really want to make me cryyyyyyyyy
But I love you !
Do you really want to make me cryyyyyyyyy
But I love you !
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Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 3:05am
oh good god - I love it!!
Are you quoting Boy George!!
He has great make-up style!!
You just made
my heart smile - and Boy George's heart too!! LOL
Are you quoting Boy George!!
He has great make-up style!!
You just made
my heart smile - and Boy George's heart too!! LOL
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Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 1:54am
hey Tim
I've been putting my writing on the backburner until things at home calmed down a little.
It's my favorite one too.
I remember taking it at church, when I would go with my mother. How the priest would lay it on your tongue. I always found it somewhat trusting in a way. But I didn't take it that way. I'd put my hand out instead.
Thanks for stopping by!!
I've been putting my writing on the backburner until things at home calmed down a little.
It's my favorite one too.
I remember taking it at church, when I would go with my mother. How the priest would lay it on your tongue. I always found it somewhat trusting in a way. But I didn't take it that way. I'd put my hand out instead.
Thanks for stopping by!!
Re. Flower Bomb
9th Jun 2024 4:43am
Dear A,
From start to finish I thought this piece was lovely. The images you set forth jumped off the page for me. It was flirty, fun, playful, prayerful and joyful.
I have no green thumb so I’m constantly in awe of those who do but i also think things are brighter when love is in play. Fab write. H🌷
From start to finish I thought this piece was lovely. The images you set forth jumped off the page for me. It was flirty, fun, playful, prayerful and joyful.
I have no green thumb so I’m constantly in awe of those who do but i also think things are brighter when love is in play. Fab write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 2:05am
Hi H!
I got all my green thumb skills from my mom and my late grandmother (Nana).
I'm getting love vibes a lot lately. I'm grateful for every new day in love. It's been a while since I've gotten into my rhythm.
This site has been a godsent because of people like you.
Mark too - but being surrounded by positive empowering people such as yourself and others keep me going.
So, thank you. Truly:)
and for the RL!
woop woop
I got all my green thumb skills from my mom and my late grandmother (Nana).
I'm getting love vibes a lot lately. I'm grateful for every new day in love. It's been a while since I've gotten into my rhythm.
This site has been a godsent because of people like you.
Mark too - but being surrounded by positive empowering people such as yourself and others keep me going.
So, thank you. Truly:)
and for the RL!
woop woop
Re. Flower Bomb
10th Jun 2024 2:51am
Adelphina, this is nature magic that enchants and is rapture for my soul. As I read I could see this all with the colors and sensation you created for spring days in the field with lovers magic entwining. I loved every last line here. It gave me a sense of what is important in life and the memories it brought back of my own days surrounded by nature in the wonder of young love.
John
John
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Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 2:09am
Hey john,
I see your love for nature in your avatar!! LOL
Sometimes love grows in the most unexpected places. I wanted
to write about the explosion of love. Wanting it to feel feminine with lots of color. I'm in a great place in life. Felt like celebrating it with a flower bomb:)
thanks for the RL!!!
Woop woop
I see your love for nature in your avatar!! LOL
Sometimes love grows in the most unexpected places. I wanted
to write about the explosion of love. Wanting it to feel feminine with lots of color. I'm in a great place in life. Felt like celebrating it with a flower bomb:)
thanks for the RL!!!
Woop woop
Re. Flower Bomb
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Jun 2024 3:30pm
10th Jun 2024 3:29pm
That last line sealed this beauty perfectly. The merge of individuals into unity. Gorgeous
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Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 2:24am
Hi C:)
I'm so glad you enjoyed this write.
It's totally what it's about - unity:)
It's really a great place to be!
Thanks for stopping by!!
I'm so glad you enjoyed this write.
It's totally what it's about - unity:)
It's really a great place to be!
Thanks for stopping by!!
Re. Flower Bomb
10th Jun 2024 4:56pm
I love the way you wove this one. And that seedling us at the end is beautiful. It's what we do, isn't it? Invest ourselves into an us that blooms because of the investment.
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Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 2:26am
Hi Willow
It takes time to get to that level of trust. It's not easy.
But when it comes naturally it doesn't feel hard.
It honestly feels like we've known each other for years.
sometimes people just click:)
thanks for the RL and stopping by!
It takes time to get to that level of trust. It's not easy.
But when it comes naturally it doesn't feel hard.
It honestly feels like we've known each other for years.
sometimes people just click:)
thanks for the RL and stopping by!
Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 2:30am
You are enjoying each other's company and getting a blessing in disguise. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 2:54am
hey Cisco!
It is a blessing. I'm in a great place in my life right now!
it feels great:)
thanks amigo!
It is a blessing. I'm in a great place in my life right now!
it feels great:)
thanks amigo!
Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 3:17am
Excellently written…just so beautiful! The flowers, the breeze, the reference to the Eucharist…so we’ll done!
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Re: Re. Flower Bomb
12th Jun 2024 3:23am
hey RPM!
Thanks for your snaps amigo.
Just went where my mind went:)
Thanks for stopping by for a read.
Thanks for your snaps amigo.
Just went where my mind went:)
Thanks for stopping by for a read.
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13th Jun 2024 10:59am
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16th Jun 2024 1:46am
Re. Flower Bomb
Anonymous
4th Jul 2024 4:38pm
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2024 10:25pm
Wow Adelphina, great ink of just “jotting” thoughts down. This turned out fantastic, luv it. Purple luv & hugs 💜
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Re: Re. Flower Bomb
15th Jul 2024 2:56am
Hi FG!
Thank you. I had this whole image in my mind of an explosion of flowers. LOL
thank you so much!
Thanks for stopping by for a read.
It's nice to see you on DUP:)
Thank you. I had this whole image in my mind of an explosion of flowers. LOL
thank you so much!
Thanks for stopping by for a read.
It's nice to see you on DUP:)