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My Jupiter
what planet are
you from pluto
Jupiter ceres
because you
definitely can't
be from mars
You're like no
other so gentle
and empathic
manly, tender
& genuine too
you're not after
a quick fix hook
up one-nighter
don't think that
you're god's gift
to women you're
a present for sure
where are you from
my other worldly guy
you from pluto
Jupiter ceres
because you
definitely can't
be from mars
You're like no
other so gentle
and empathic
manly, tender
& genuine too
you're not after
a quick fix hook
up one-nighter
don't think that
you're god's gift
to women you're
a present for sure
where are you from
my other worldly guy
Author's Note
It was written in the stars ♡
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Re. My Jupiter
8th Jun 2024 2:02pm
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8th Jun 2024 2:08pm
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8th Jun 2024 2:40pm
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8th Jun 2024 5:02pm
Re. My Jupiter
8th Jun 2024 3:06pm
Such a cool image, I love love it.
Very cool poem and I'm glad you have a special love
Very cool poem and I'm glad you have a special love
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8th Jun 2024 5:04pm
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8th Jun 2024 8:42pm
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9th Jun 2024 11:48am
Re. My Jupiter
9th Jun 2024 1:16am
Ahh the Language of the Spheres and the man who fell from the stars. Lovely, Duende. xo
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Re: Re. My Jupiter
9th Jun 2024 11:53am
The man who fell from the stars made me smile. Thanks heaps for your comment, Ahavati :-)
Re. My Jupiter
13th Jun 2024 5:15am
Dear D,
Does he have a brother? I’m just funnin ya! What I enjoyed about this is the shout out for the many men who are kind and thoughtful and empathetic but don’t get acknowledged because they’re bashful and often times overlooked. That’s my literal take on it. My metaphorical take is I love planets and stars and this sent me into quite the stratospherical Milky way of delight. 😊
H🌷
Does he have a brother? I’m just funnin ya! What I enjoyed about this is the shout out for the many men who are kind and thoughtful and empathetic but don’t get acknowledged because they’re bashful and often times overlooked. That’s my literal take on it. My metaphorical take is I love planets and stars and this sent me into quite the stratospherical Milky way of delight. 😊
H🌷
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Re: Re. My Jupiter
13th Jun 2024 9:38am
Dear H, yes he has ;-) So happy to hear you enjoyed my little shout out. I love everything related to the universe, so this piece is close to my heart 💕
Thanks heaps for the visit and your amazing comment, you made my day :-)
Thanks heaps for the visit and your amazing comment, you made my day :-)