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explicit faith
there is a
dry pond
full of hope
in the backyard
of my house...
where the
fishes live...
those fishes
don't dream
of the pond
being filled with water....
dry pond
full of hope
in the backyard
of my house...
where the
fishes live...
those fishes
don't dream
of the pond
being filled with water....
Published 5th Jun 2024
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5th Jun 2024 7:42pm
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6th Jun 2024 4:34am
Wow! You sure have some weird fish there in your 'pond' Dimpy. Maybe I'm missing something here. To me, it reads like a poem about adapting or making do with what you have. There's definitely a tinge of sadness about this read, like it has something to do with climate change. I know it has been very hot over there in India lately too!
6th Jun 2024 5:51am
hey snaggy
yaa those fish are living in a delusion... and yes this stuff is somewhat sad, well you heard that right it is very hot here...
yaa those fish are living in a delusion... and yes this stuff is somewhat sad, well you heard that right it is very hot here...
6th Jun 2024 5:45am
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