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Sacrifice
Lay me down
at your altar
take me to
your eden
and let me
worship you
your wine is
my delivery
your bread
my prayer
your rising
my saviour
your semen
my salvation
your baptism
my penance
Let my body
be your lamb
your sacrifice
my blood our
holy covenant
You are my god
sex is my religion
at your altar
take me to
your eden
and let me
worship you
your wine is
my delivery
your bread
my prayer
your rising
my saviour
your semen
my salvation
your baptism
my penance
Let my body
be your lamb
your sacrifice
my blood our
holy covenant
You are my god
sex is my religion
Author's Note
Hozier - Take me to Church.
https://youtu.be/MYSVMgRr6pw
https://youtu.be/MYSVMgRr6pw
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Anonymous
30th May 2024 6:40pm
Ohhhh...I see you goin' there today, Duende!!!
Very inspiring indeed!
Very inspiring indeed!
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1st Jun 2024 11:08am
What an amazing compliment, thanks heaps. Also for the reading list, I appreciate it.
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2nd Jun 2024 2:44am
I think what I loved about this little ditty is that this can applied to absolutely anybody, body or soul, also it is a spiritual experience and can be it's own form of prayer, it's open to everybody regardless what walk of life you may originate from, I can get behind that, it's an instinct any human being can feel and experience and I feel like the way you wrote this broadened those barriers by not confining it to the usual specifics you see in poetry and I wholeheartedly appreciate that.
Thank you for that darling :)
Kind Regards
-A
Thank you for that darling :)
Kind Regards
-A
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2nd Jun 2024 5:12am
Oh wow, what an amazing comment! Had to look up ditty, what a lovely word is that and nice to be able to add it to my ever expanding vocabulary :-)
I do believe religion goes much further than believing in God or Allah, it can be nature or sex, basically everything. I'm really honored you say I don't confine to the usual specifics you see in poetry, that truly means the world to me.
Thanks heaps for you extensive comment, you made my day darling 💕
I do believe religion goes much further than believing in God or Allah, it can be nature or sex, basically everything. I'm really honored you say I don't confine to the usual specifics you see in poetry, that truly means the world to me.
Thanks heaps for you extensive comment, you made my day darling 💕
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