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Ec_Statically Us : Ep One: Subliminal
if you don't have the intellectual bandwidth
to decipher her meaning...then a lot of what she says may go
over your head as you sink your mush-roomed head into her being
thick and polite....she'll moan...let you finish
.....inside her
but you may have been diminished
marginalized in her eyes
cuz you didn't understand the assignment...how to inspire alignment
when she spread eagle for you
or seductively turned on her B side...
she gave you options on how to reveal yourself
you decide
on how you wanna penetrate her
how to venerate the divine act of He and She
her woman yearns for re-newness draped in the masculine
her Spirit...her connectivity
her exclusivity...
know ye
she's a one of one
feed her the dreamscapes of a man's eccentricity
your vulnerabilities and your vulgarities
again and again...fill her with remembrance through pain
pushed with hard cored clarity...she needs to feel your commitment
your convictions...
your covenant
and she'll be you sub-terra
the Gaia throbbing beneath your movements
day to day...she'll stay. as long as she gets to clench to the stench of you
to every inch of your downward strokes
just to feel showered.....
in the name of....
to decipher her meaning...then a lot of what she says may go
over your head as you sink your mush-roomed head into her being
thick and polite....she'll moan...let you finish
.....inside her
but you may have been diminished
marginalized in her eyes
cuz you didn't understand the assignment...how to inspire alignment
when she spread eagle for you
or seductively turned on her B side...
she gave you options on how to reveal yourself
you decide
on how you wanna penetrate her
how to venerate the divine act of He and She
her woman yearns for re-newness draped in the masculine
her Spirit...her connectivity
her exclusivity...
know ye
she's a one of one
feed her the dreamscapes of a man's eccentricity
your vulnerabilities and your vulgarities
again and again...fill her with remembrance through pain
pushed with hard cored clarity...she needs to feel your commitment
your convictions...
your covenant
and she'll be you sub-terra
the Gaia throbbing beneath your movements
day to day...she'll stay. as long as she gets to clench to the stench of you
to every inch of your downward strokes
just to feel showered.....
in the name of....
Published 28th May 2024
Author's Note
She has always overwhelmed my city-scape...
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28th May 2024 2:10pm
What a breathtakingly sensual piece this is. Chemistry starts with the intellect to understand her.
Fascinating image with the tilted city-scape, it pairs beautiful with your write.
Fascinating image with the tilted city-scape, it pairs beautiful with your write.
28th May 2024 8:38pm
29th May 2024 00:55am
Naaj, this was hot in a new way. You went past the normal 'fuck your socks off' into a deeper realm. The way you peeled into the narrative subject showed layers that the narrator seems to think most people don't see. There's a reverence, and also some distaste for people with unrefined palates. I dug this. It had depth that was different from past writes.
You may want to soften this line. It hit off for me.
as long as she gets to clench to the stench of you
30th May 2024 8:38am
As always, I appreciate your insights, Betty
Very thorough and analytical ..even when I don't totally agree.
Which is why I leave my poems up for honest critique
'' You may want to soften this line. It hit off for me ''
Nahh...there'll be no softening...my intended needs me raw and unfiltered....deep and personal...just for her.
Again...diggin the engagement..
Very thorough and analytical ..even when I don't totally agree.
Which is why I leave my poems up for honest critique
'' You may want to soften this line. It hit off for me ''
Nahh...there'll be no softening...my intended needs me raw and unfiltered....deep and personal...just for her.
Again...diggin the engagement..
