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A Hope Analysis
Hope is an external thing
Positive... but still waiting for a something [else] to happen
to us...instead of making things happen
Hope works best
When you're going hardcore..outside...in the paint
Speaking to the UNI-verse in real time
Visualizing...actualizing...activating
Particles of God
Your bod...a hydrogen collider
Coinciding providence and prophecy
You are the sum total
The Divine hope of your Creator
For you to believe in....and achieve something greater
Than yesterday
Positive... but still waiting for a something [else] to happen
to us...instead of making things happen
Hope works best
When you're going hardcore..outside...in the paint
Speaking to the UNI-verse in real time
Visualizing...actualizing...activating
Particles of God
Your bod...a hydrogen collider
Coinciding providence and prophecy
You are the sum total
The Divine hope of your Creator
For you to believe in....and achieve something greater
Than yesterday
Published 31st May 2024
| Edited 7th Jun 2024
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31st May 2024 10:54am
31st May 2024 11:10am
Such epic last lines to an amazing and profound piece.
To me this reads as the definition of hope and as someone who has felt hopeless many times, I find this write to be very inspiring. Thanks for sharing your wisdom with us, Naajir.
To me this reads as the definition of hope and as someone who has felt hopeless many times, I find this write to be very inspiring. Thanks for sharing your wisdom with us, Naajir.
31st May 2024 11:59am
4th Jun 2024 12:27pm
And there it is! You took hope & ran with it! So much more than we give it credit for or power to. Beautiful
6th Jun 2024 6:14am
Amen. Very powerful. Brilliantly written. Into the list it goes. Appreciate you.
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6th Jun 2024 7:12am
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7th Jun 2024 5:35am
yes I also believe in positivity...i always hope for the best... but the habit of hoping can sometimes lead to negativity... well this is very nice stuff ...
