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in my dreams I
run with wild
horses thru red
sketched twilight
prairies
neither escaping
the night
nor chasing after
the dawn
Published 28th May 2024
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28th May 2024 2:39pm
It took me a third read to understand the feeling of contentment in time and place. Being present. Even if I'm not right, its beautiful.
28th May 2024 3:00pm
I think you nailed the poems intent perfectly.
Well done and many thanks, Pinkdreams.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Well done and many thanks, Pinkdreams.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
29th May 2024 11:51pm
30th May 2024 3:11am
I can't think of much else.
Thank you, Detritus. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Detritus. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
9th Aug 2024 4:02pm
That's a pretty awesome vivid image, one that conveys freedom and strength.
Well done.
Well done.
15th Aug 2024 3:32am
